the LONG night with two men

The other night i was siting alone at home dreaming about what might be on HBO after 11:00, when all of a sudden there was a knock at my door. so i tied my silk house robe and walked to the door. it was the Domano's delivery guy. he asked if i had ordered a large sausage, and i told him no. but i invited him in any way to chair with me in this hour of night. 1

I had my mouth around a big juicy slice when we hear another knock at my door. we ti-tied up as quickly as possible and i raced for the door. when i opened the door it was the up stairs neighbor, Mr.Hungsolow. He noticed that my robe was open and invited himself in to retrieve a cup of sugar. 2

The delivery guy make some room on the bed for Mr.Hungsolow. i ran off to the kitchen to fine some sugar but when i came back and sat down i noticed that the to were no were to be found. i look under the bed and in the bathroom, when all of a sudden i hear some giggles coming from my closet. i flung the doors back and peered inside to fine them both huddled together laughing.3

We spent all night playing hide and go seek while watching porn on HBO, until Mr.Hungsolow's wife came.  4


TO BE CONTINUED...

Author notes

this is not a true story. if it was i would have gotten beat up by Mrs.Hungsolow. it is also a metaphor for adults acting like children trying to act like adults. all like kids try to watch porn to learn and invite them self's into other peoples houses.

has it ever happened to you?

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  • Deathless1
    March 5, 2008
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    IT IS A TWO PARTER

  • The Pole Star
    March 5, 2008

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    Well but was there any horror in the story? I believe that it ended up before it started...sorry if I was too ride here...but that's how it reflected over me...

    beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 1, ending: 1, dialog: 1, characters: 1.