[ you gave me life for which ive never shown the love and appreciation to you uknown 1 ]

you gave me life for which ive never shown the love and appreciation to you uknown 1

you stayed with me in times of strife and all you see is ungrateful eyes in the night 2

as i see now i had no right to cause so many fights between us in this life 3

forgive me mum cause i whish to make it right and let you rest in a good light and so i say goodnight

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  • Sir Squigglim
    April 29, 2008
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    its short but really good. in a way, it was powerful.