He ripped off her clothing and lashed at her with a leather belt. It lashed at her vagina with great force. It was bleeding profusely and leaking its juices out in a small gush and stopped. He hit the vagina again. The woman was helpless to stop him. Her hands were strapped down to the table. Her legs spread to the maximum amount allowed with her muscles. Her nipples clamped and being pulled with yarn stretching them out. He cautiously beat her saying nothing at all. 1
The woman took all that he dishes out. Not one tear shed on her beautiful face. The man stopped whipping her for a moment and turned the table she was on upside-down with a crank. Her bottom now shown to his face the man had made a cut out where it was so he could easily gain access to it. He lashed at her butt with the whip several times leaving marks behind it. This left her bottom with red welts and bleeding. 2
He turned her back over and whipped her a few more times. The man then removed his pants and his cock was swollen and ready to penetrate her. He got near her and yelled at her. “Have you learned your lesson?”3
“Yes, my master I have learned not to disobey you again. Please reward my tender pussy with your manly cock.”4
The man drove his cock into her bleeding vagina thrusting it fast and deeply inside of her. Her screams echoed throughout the room. She just took the pain and spoke to him begging for him to destroy the inner walls of her vagina. The women cried out in pleasure as her vagina gushed with her cum out on the swollen cock that was driving into her pussy. She then begged for her ass to be fucked by his massive cock. The woman begged and begged for an hour he wasn’t done with her pussy. He would make it bleed more and make her suffer the consequences just a bit longer.5
This has been spell checked by mircosoft word.
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very mean and in the end erotic,pain and pleasure all mixed into one not bad lol keep up the good writing
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I like this line the best "The women cried out in pleasure as her vagina gushed with her cum out on the swollen cock that was driving into her pussy. She then begged for her ass to be fucked by his massive cock."
mmmmmmmmmmmmm.... I hope he gives her what she wants.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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sounds like torture.. here.. to me.. but it does fit what some beg for and demand of the one that is with them
Riftkin
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Some interesting bits here...I would use a capital "M" for Master and maybe add some more detail to the action here. But tis a good one.
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Oh My God. I not into the man and woman s/m but I still like it.
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Very descriptive
I would hope that whipping a vagina is not standard fare since scarring there would be traumatic. ouch! All in all a good example of both sides of dominant/submissive love. I think most of us like an edge to sexual relations and this is certainlt "edgy."
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Wheres the rest of it?!
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Woah!! Oh my gosh now that is just... Wow. This was written so well and just literally blew me away. The way you just let go with this one is... Wow! You almost have me speechless here. I could feel the pain from this the words were so well written.
~Joann
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Ouch!!! I was feeling that! you know this disclaimer, if you just tab it as erotica sexual bondage or whatever it cannot be deleted as it has already been established what it is saves you ruin the presentation of your story with this big chunk of a warning. Plus when you catagorise it properly kids or whatever cannot click on it if they have the parental control on so your all good.
I wonder what that girl did to disobey him, she certainly got punished, don't think she will be sitting down for a good week or more!
no spelling mistakes either so all good and your grammar is good in this!
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I fixed it up with out the disclaier is that better?
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oh thats much better without that massive chunk! It was a great piece and the layout is great now! Well done with this!
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I think... well... You have made me speechless... really.. if anything let my silence know what a FUCking mouthwatering job youve done.. more thank kinky, goes beyond bdsm... goes beyond anything... you really drilled it through the core.... you have me at ur knees... wishing I had the guts to let loose like that with my erotica...
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I really can't comment...
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