Broken is a beautiful sound1
Says the angel that touches the ground2
The sound of growing,3
The sound of strength4
The sound of knowing5
Your furthest length6
Being pushed to bottom floor7
Gives ability to get up once more8
Broken is a beautiful sound,9
Says the demon to reach the ground,10
The sound of loss,11
The sound of pain12
The sound you'll cross,13
Once more, once again14
Giving ability to pull you faster,15
Because you seem like the perfect disaster16
Broken is a beautiful sound17
Says the human, whose life is bound,18
Twisted, morbid thoughts we think19
Leave us standing on the brink,20
Of execution, non-existence21
Leaving humanity, in far distance22
Leaving us once more, rebound23
Broken is a beautiful sound
Author notes
Boys are idiots. But we love them anyways! 
Happy Days!
A contest entry
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I worked for this for 3 days so please,no mean comments
Comments
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This is truly beautiful,I wish I could write something like this.
And unlike my work,it that rythm and it flows.
Well Done,hun.
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very good poem, i like the rhyming in this poem , making it beautiful and deserving for trophy..my good wishes r with you hon. good luck and keep writting.
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This was a really good poem. No mean comments from me. And boys don't get any better when they turn into men, either.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering.
Brooke
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I really like this one!!!
It has beat, rhythm, emotion, and truth(Boys can be dumb
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I can't believe you didn't win any of the other contests.
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xD I know, I can't either. And thanks.
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i must say you wrote simply beautiful poem which has meaning as well as rhythem . well done dear , you are doing good keep it up.
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That flows very well. I like the background. Its beautiful. Thanks for the entry!
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I like this a lot. It's absolutely beautiful.
You rhyme really well, I'm still pretty bad at that. ^^
This is really deep, and absolutely wonderful. You definitely have a ton of potential, and this is a lovely first entry to my contest.
Thank you so much for entering, and I wish you the best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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Thank you!
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It Is Da Beautiful Poem
Very well written
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I liked this poem!
It really stood out from the other poems I've read. The rhyming is incredible!
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This is great. I'm impressed. I don't know any other 10 year olds who can write a poem this good. Great job.
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Wow, the rhyming pattern flows very nicely and you do a good job of including strong working and detail. Great job and good luck!!!
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Oh my gosh. I adore this. Positively adore it. It flows beautifully and it's very well written!!
Great job and don't ever stop writing!
♥Maureen♥
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Well my dear, I have to say that this is beautifully written!
Anna, you have talent, some GREAT talent!
I think you would make it out there as a stupendous writer!
BTW! I have something for ya finally! YAY! Messaging you what I have of your story, feel free to change up ANYTHING you want!
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Beautiful writing...Your poem rocks!!! I love the imagery, the description, and the way it flows like it was meant to be. You have talent. Keep writing!!!
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Good Poem
I liked it it was good
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