Here I lay,

A contest entry

• Two Words by Taylor Renee. 350 points, ended March 5, 2008, 25 entries
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

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  Tiger-Lily
  October 10, 2008
  
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  Ouch...very painful imagery here...paints a glum picture. I'm really hoping this never happens to anyone. o__o
  
  Nice powerful entry...although not quite two words.
  
  -HT

  
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  karmaxandxcrayons
  August 4, 2008
  
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  AHHH. You basically just voiced my fear. In two simple words, you did a great job of painting a sad, forgotten picture in my mind.
  
  Great job and don't ever stop writing!!
  
  .♥. Maureen .♥.
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  Taylor Renee
  March 5, 2008
  
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  Ahw.
  
  This almost made me cry.
  
  Congradulations. You put an entry here that was TWO words that almost made me cry.
  
  This is sadly beautiful. It's just...extraordinary.
  
  Great work. GREAT work.
  
  Thank you so much for entering, and I wish you the best of luck!
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  xoxox
  -♥-
  Tay