*DISCLAIMER*
content is extremely taboo writing do not read if this offends you. I am not responsible for your actions. This is merely a story by reading this disclaimer you will not hold me liable for it's content. 1
Not Your field of Daisies Three2
Don stood up, unable to control what his mind was doing to him. Persuading him, controlling his every move. Was this lust or something much deeper than that.3
He stood stiff, and still for a few moments. Admiring his beautiful baby girl. It seemed like only yesterday that he was sitting besides her Mother, holding his little bundle of joy in his hand. 4
Very soon though he knew the roles would be reversed, and that she would be holding her little bundle of joy in he hands, or like he had fantasized for so long. Between those precious matured breast of hers, so desirable. They looked so tasty he just wanted to sink his teeth into them, suck them, lick them and lap and bit at her nipples, as they got harder with his every movement. 5
“Well Don't just stand there, drop those pants Daddy,” she said, this time she used a more softer tone, a more gentler approach, as if she could sense his fear, his mind begging him to stop. She wanted him at ease before she worked her magic with his pleasure stick.6
Don watched as his baby, stood up, wandering over to him and fell to her knees right before his pants.7
“I suppose I can do this for you, after all the many times you had to help me with my pants, I am sure one time can't hurt, just loosen up daddy, tension might make for a great blow job, but the more relaxed you are, to more fun we can have.”8
Reaching towards his belt, she unclasped it, licking her way down from the tips of his navel to the class of his belt.9
He shivered, taking a long deep breath, holding his moans deep in the back of his throat before he took another look at kitty, pulling his pants down to his knees. 10
Immediacy she grabbed his cock in her hands, squeezing it from his underwear. Hard, making him stiffer by the moment. She rubbed it hard, letting her tongue slide up and down between his inner thighs. She could feel the heating desire as he lowered his hand to help her take of his underwear.11
Together they slowly pulled down his underwear, right down to his ankles, with the help of her sensual tongue, gliding up and down. Slipping his pants and underwear of, he moved them to the side, holding her face towards him. She looked so innocent, yet so aroused, so stimulated and hungry for him. Like this had become her greatest desire, she needed him, just like he needed her.12
Even if was wrong, he would not deny that it just felt so right, it felt so natural, Like this was meant to be, that they loved each other far beyond any normal Daddy, daughter relationship, and something inside of him burned to know why, why did he feel so helpless in her grip? She had him wrapped around her little finger and it drove him wild.13
Taking her hair in his hands, he ran his fingers gently through it, remembering the times when he used to plat her hair before school and how she would walk to school with her chest poking out and her head held high because she was so happy that her daddy could do plats in her hair. 14
Now with age he wanted nothing more than to have that hair covering him, as she lowered her mouth over his meat and consumed it deep. He wanted to feel her tongue roll and massage every inch of his thickness, he wanted her sweet saliva to cover it completely, to drip all over her, and for her to pull back and do it all again. He wanted her bad.15
“Oh baby, this is so wrong, we can't do this,” Don said still holding her head back, only inches away from his hardness.16
Kitty smiled, leaning forward, laying her first kiss upon his cock.17
“It's a little to late for that Daddy, we already are doing it.”
Author notes
FOR the Taboo contest....
I dedicate this to a friend of mine... who's many words of engouragement inspire me to write and do me who I am, regarless of what people see me as ...
Blair
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A contest entry
- {Taboo Subjects} by Zsadist Gates.
1000 points, ended April 2, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Woah Intence :b
Wow, this was really intence... Once more I am strucken with awe at your vocabulary choice and the way the words flow over the page, like water flowing in a river, continous and never losing pace or falling behind. Im amazed with this work of literature! Nice job =]
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Well... wow. Definitely taboo, that's for sure. I really like the intimacy of this piece, and the fact that the feelings are mutual. I also liked the fact that it was the daughter that was pushing it and not the father, if you know what I mean?
I am a total sucker for incest stories, to be honest, and I don't read nearly enough of them. Maybe that's because they're so very taboo. Most of the ones I write are siblings, but father and daughter works too.
I really like the flow of this, and the fact that the reader's inside the father's head, seeing his thoughts as the erotica progresses.
This is a surprisingly gentle piece for its content, and I really like the subtlety of the emotions, and a little less focus on the physical, though there was a lot of focus on that too. It's a good mix.
Thanks, and good luck!
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All I can say is Oh my God
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Again this is a well written piece and the disclaimer at the start is well advised
Once again, you can forgive me for not going for an in depth analysis with this but needless to say that your writing is as good as ever and I actually enjoyed reading this despite the material
Well done!
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OMG! thats taboo at its best. The picture makes it worse as well, so artfully picked! I thought when I read the disclaimer that I would be sickened out, but strangly enough I wasn't. It was brilliant, you didn't portray that as this dirty sort of molestation but that it was sincerely felt by both parties. You hear about brothers and sisters becoming attacted to each other and of uncles to nieces and such like, but this was brilliantly put. Though it is a sickening subject that a dad would even do something like that with his daughter it didn't feel like that more of a confused sort of relationship has come between them, that they are father and daughter in blood but not in mind. It was very well written, I enjoyed reading that. You didn't even make the sexual parts feel dirty and sickening but more sensual, that is good working. Watch you his/her and he/she's though love they are getting abit mixed up! Bloody brilliant. Good luck in the contest not that you need it!
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very well written and beautifully worded. you may wish to put a disclaimer on this .
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