Part One;1
I knew the
exact
moment
I was awoken.
Something...
err...someone
had hit me HARD!2
A groan,
a cough,
and a
what the hell
later, I was staring into
the eyes of my best friend. 3
His bright blue eyes
looked far too alert
for...err...4
"Razie, what time is it?"
I groaned.5
"Ah. So you can speak.
Was afraid I broke your
voice or something.
Its about three am."6
"You woke me?!
At 3?! By JUMPING
on me?!?"7
"Well, its not
my fault
your bed is under the window!"
He laughed. 8
"Ugh! Why?
I need my beauty sleep!"
I snapped at him.9
"Haha, hun,"
He said,
"Years of beauty sleep wouldn't help."10
I
Slapped
Him. 11
But not that hard. 12
"Ow!!"13
"Take it like a man, idiot.
When will you learn
NOT to wake a girl?!"14
"Fine, fine, good night."
he snorted. 15
I moved over
to make room for him
on my bed,
rolled over,
and fell asleep.
Author notes
Found an old story of mine. Decided it would be a cool narritive poem story. Thanks to kami for the idea <3
In a list
A contest entry
- Poets/Storywriters 16 and Under. by kierancluchey.
250 points, ended June 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Title ideas, please.
Comments
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Hee hee =P
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lol, made me giggle a bit! I'm just curious to see what you had in mind....it leaves a lot of room for the reader's thoughts. I like it so far, I'm off to see the next part. I'm not sure about the title, either. Hold on, let me get a feel for it.
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