Silence.
It beats, it throbs,
It swallows my sobs,
A drummers sound,
That doesn't let my heart pound,
Your voice in my ears,
The one thing I'll never hear,
So kiss me in my mind,
Escape this humankind,
Because there's this whisper in my head,
Saying everything you never said,
It thrives on my sorrow,
Threatens me with no more tomorrow,
So move your hands-
And don't just stand
Come alive, my dear,
And wipe this bloody tear
Because it keeps stinging my eyes,
Messing with my vision,
And saying that you've died.
Silence.
Author notes
I don't know if anyone will understand this, I barely did as I wrote it but then I looked back and my soul had fallen on the page. The beating of my heart those words. Interpret them as you wish. Comments?
A contest entry
- Poetry contest by Xtclozer-.
700 points, ended March 9, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think. It says please!
Comments
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I loved it! Very good. I loved the way you described everything. Very descriptive . You are in the finalist list for sure 
Thanks for entering!!!
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absoltely lovely... amazing steph, yet again you show what an amazing writer you are. good job.
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This is absolutely fantastic. Seriously, I love it. :] Great job on this poem. ^_^
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I love how you have got it to rhyme. brilliant little poem well done!
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Wow! GOOD JOB!
this was an amazing piece girlie, i loved it!
I, like blair, nearly cried...
Because there's this whisper in my head,
Saying everything you never said
...THAT line was the one that nearly made me cry.
Excellent job... a deep and honest piece... keep it up.
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I know how this feels..I know every words of the deadly silence and shattered love in which we drive our souls into... because we still feel them close..we still feel them there, their touch even when they are not here... with us...
lovely..made me cry
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