I looked up at the cold blue eyes, those blue eyes that had first attracted me to him. 1
The blood dripped off his chin as he knelt down once again by my side. 2
The green carpet under my shaking body was covered in blood. 3
I smiled, 4
"I love you" 5
It was a whisper but I knew he heard it, and he smiled back, a now satisfying look on his lips as he raised the knife once again. 6
I winced as the pain struck. 7
He pulled the bloodied knife out of my stomach. 8
I knew my heart only had a few more beats left. 9
But my smile stayed on as he put the knife to his lips, licking every drop of my blood off. 10
"I love you, my murderer" closing my eyes I let out a sigh, it was finally over.11
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A contest entry
- Passionate Death. by asthray.heart.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Gads,,,,
In the Vampire vein, so to speak, grins... talk about a submissive female, give your life for his pleasure, well, okay...?
smiles...
amicus....
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Wooo your passionate about me =D
*gleeeee*
Hehe anyways lawl
Now you have me laughing. When I shouldn't coz this is so deeply beauty.
I love you my murderer, awww thats so sweet
hehe mi kinda love ey 
Chillingly good. Pre-lims.
Tnks for entering babe.
Amaya
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