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The moon hung over the smooth water. A beautiful woman stood at the bow of the ship as it glided slowly through the water. A man walked up to her. "Your late." She whispered without looking up.1

"Well m'lady," Alanna turned sharply around. The last thing she saw was the bright silver of a dagger and the feel of metal in her stomach.2

Warm sunlight filled the captian's cabin. He leaned over the woman next to him and took a deep breath. His sigh woke her up. He smiled. "Ah, my beautiful Alanna, don't you have a husband to go to?"3

"I suppose." She replied as she slowly rose to get ready.

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This story is mostly a flash back.

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  • ice wolf Greeters member
    March 5, 2008
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    Can't wait to read the rest. Good job so far. Keep penning.
    Ice Wolf