Body Language Part 5

Part 51

Walking through the store Rachel walked beside Ryan and slid her arm through his2

I hope that when I find a man he is just like you3

If circumstances were different would you even be attracted to a girl like me4

Sure I would Ryan said, you are funny and smart and as cute as can be5

Looking toward the floor do you think Sarah is prettier than me6

What kind of question is that 7

Where is all of this coming from8

And please do not treat me as though I am dumb9

Since I moved into the frat house my freshman year of college 10

Leaving just you and Mom at the house11

You have been acting different Rachel12

This I can truly acknowledge13

I just missed you so badly that I was going out of my head14

I would have done anything to get you to come back home15

When Mom started getting sicker you hung out with us instead16

of drinking with your buddies and chasing other girls17

I liked it when you were with us it felt like a home again18

I never knew that she would get quite that sick you know19

Tears welled up in her eyes I miss her so much20

Ryan hugs her I think that we are doing ok though21

Wiping her eyes he kisses her softly on her forehead22

She hugs him deeply and rests her head on his chest23

I love you Ryan more than anyone ever will24

Because when we are together we are the best25

As they walk down the remainder of the isles26

I would like to make something special for Sarah tomorrow night27

We just need to pick up a few more things 28

And oh yeah she told me to pick up some antifreeze29

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    December 28, 2004
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    the plot thickens, this just keeps getting moire interesting. I keep waiting for the inevitable events to unfold but it keeps luring me on. the suspense is killing me >;o)

  • onfuego4dios
    December 4, 2004
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    o0o mystery. very nice touch i love it. your very talented. please never stop writing.