Another second,1
Gone.2
Another minute,3
Here.4
Another hour,5
Waiting.6
If only for that one moment,7
Time could have stood still,8
Or just not have been.9
Time though is always there,10
It's with us through everything.11
Time will only wait for us,12
If we wait for time.13
If something is meant to be,14
Then be it will.15
In love Patience is our Queen,16
Time is our God.17
Give it time and all will be well,18
Give it time and you will understand.19
Press stop on your watch,20
Sit back and remember,21
Enjoy the memories.22
When time catches up,23
You will live them all again,24
A thousand times.25
Author notes
I hope this kind of meets your criteria just wait and it will all work out. My boyfriend is in the same situation with visitation rights.
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this is insanely good. i mean - WOW! exceptional about time, and... i have to read this again. thoughtprovoking. This was just great.
you did very good on this. good luck with your future writing!
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I love this. The writing style was great. I liked when you said "time will only wait for us if we wait for time". This is truely a good poem.
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great
i love it i get is -
hey this poem is real good good job thanxz for the applaud
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great job!! it really got me to think about what we're missing in life because some people dont have the patients to wait for something. and the words went really well together. keep it up
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thats so brilliant, i too think about time an awful lot and memories too. it really spoke to me
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Brilliant. So true. Time is more than just a scientific measure.
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thoughtful
very good metaphors. very true ideas on time. -
keep ut the good writes...
dark depresion AKA
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Fantastic
Wow, it's great, I love the way you seem to play with time, which is really thought provoking, it really gets you thinking, well done. -
This was a very excellent wirte. Thank you for reffering this to me. It makes a lot of sense. Although it is hard to wait for time, nothing can be done about it. This was an excellent write. Keep up the good work and thanks for the encouragement! Merry Christmas!
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Dude, very nice, thats all I gotta say
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interesting... well done and good flow
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Oh-ooh!!! an excellent piece! i give ya a applaud
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really good. the words you used just went really well.
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Time fasinates me. I sit and think about it and still, end up clueless about it. I love how the present was unknown to you a couple days ago. Or how a couple days ago used to be the present. I know I dont make sense but it is all confusing. I loved the poem! Very thought provoking!
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Beautiful poem
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A nicely written poem and it reminds me of a story by fellow Englishwoman, Susannah who wrote a story also called, Time." Look it up on this site, I think you'd enjoy the similarities. I liked the logic behind this poem.
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for me time passes me by without even noticing. I wish I could find a person who would make time stand still for me, stop that clock from moving, even if only for a short while. congrats on a nice poem
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Aww all so true i loved it keep it up
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Thanks for entering the contest. Nice job. I love the first few lines. They are awesome. That is so insightful. I hope your B/F visitation rights are for the best!!
Peace
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great
That was great i loved it it is so true and well it was great theres to many words to describe but all of them are good. -
WOW! that was so insightful and .. i dont know there are not words for how great you have captured the essance of love and time... fabulous write... you're inspirational
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Hey....... this is an excellent poem. I will forever remember it's words.... you truly have lots of wisdom. This piece flowed beautifully and smoothly.... I was really impressed. I'll definitely be checking out more of your stuff. :-) Thanks for the comments on my poems! You're going to take this contest by storm. Good luck!
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That poem is excellent! i will applaud you on that, thanks for reading my poem, i do have a sequel its just not up yet.keep up the good work, i'll be checking it!
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