I looked in the mirror as I put the final touches of my make up on. I smiled. The mirror reflected my image back and I knew that tonight they would all want me. I had put on the shortest black leather mini skirt I could find. Thigh high black boots and a leather shirt that revealed my pert breasts. I sprayed some of my favorite perfume on. Devilish Desires, how I loved that name. I grabbed my purse, took one final look into the mirror then walked out of my posh apartment.1
I hadn't always been a bad girl. Not until he changed me. He made me hate love. He made me hate everything. This silver tounged devil went by the name of, Jasper. He twisted, tainted, bruised my heart. He left me feeling disconnected with reality. I no longer knew myself, or did I? Maybe I was always meant to be bad. I did love the thoughts of torturing men. Men that were the scum of the earth. I enjoyed it. Every second of it.2
I arrived at the bar in no time and walked inside. I scanned the place to seek out my prey for the evening. Oh, the thrill of picking out one's play toy for the night. I got a rise just thinking of it. I spotted a man in the corner and walked over to him. He had deep green eyes, an emerald shade. His lips formed a smile as he looked me over. I knew just what he was thinking.3
I smiled a seductive grin and leaned down so he could get a better view of my assets. I reached down and rubbed my hand between his legs. I could already feel him growing hard. God, I was so turned on. I couldn't wait to take care of this one. I knew by the whiteness around his ring finger that he was married. What a creep I thought. He probably has a wife and kids, yet he is out here sitting in a bar. I smiled, knowing that would all end tonight. They would be better off without him.4
He paid the bartender. I insisted on taking my car when we left. I drove to a run down motel about twenty minutes away. I paid for a room in cash, a girl never leaves her trail behind. When we got in the room he shoved me against the wall. I could tell this one liked it rough. As long as I got what I wanted, I didn't care. And what I wanted he would soon find out.5
Our clothes were off in a matter of minutes. He pushed me on to the bed and rammed his cock deep inside of me. I was impressed with how endowed he was. It felt like I had a ball bat being crammed between my legs. He filled me up, like I had never been filled before. I could feel the cum dripping down my legs. When it was over he rolled over on the bed beside me. I raised up and started to kiss him down his stomach. I could hear his moans as my lips traveled the path all the way to his cock.6
I wrapped my lips around him as I slowly took him deep inside of my throat. The saltiness of pre-cum filled my mouth. I was so turned on. I knew what came next. My favorite part of the evening. The part that made me the bitch I am. He groaned when I removed myself from the bed. He laid there, his rock hard cock standing at attention, begging for more. I grinned at him and assured him the best was yet to come. I walked over to my purse and removed some ropes from it.7
I stepped back over to him and tied his hands and feet to the bed posts. He said he liked kinky girls. I smiled, not saying a word. He was in for quite the surprise. I went back to my purse and pulled a knife out from it. I held it up in the air so he could see it. The fear creped into his emerald eyes. I leaned down and kissed his lips and asked if it was worth it. He began to beg and plead with me. I just laughed at him.8
I took the knife and traced it down his stomach. It cut into his skin. Crimson red blood dripped off his stomach and on to the white sheets. He screamed out in pain as I cut him in a delicate fashion. I traced the knife slowly around his testicles as I smiled up at him. His cock had went limp already. I had to get him back hard. I rubbed my hand in swift motions on it until I felt it growing stiff once more. I held it tight in my hand then sliced all around the outer skin, peeling him like a human banana. His cries of pain echoed in the room. I then cut each of his testicles off and held them in my hands.9
His face was as white as a ghost. I heard a knock at the door and walked over letting my accomplice into the room. He grabbed me and gave me a long hard kiss as he rubbed his hand down to my thigh. I handed the knife over to him so he could finish the job. He loved this part. He walked over and stabbed the man until the last breath of life left his body. He untied him then pushed his body to the floor. He then turned back to me and unzipped his jeans. He took me with great force as he slammed me on to the bloody sheets. His cock drove deep inside my wetness. 10
What had he done to me? Who had I become since we met? I didn't know the answer to those questions, but I knew I loved him almost as much as I hated him. He played the sickest games. I never knew what each night would hold, but I knew how much it turned him on. I may have became disconnected with reality when Jasper and I met, but I kinda like how it makes me feel. Jasper and I are wanted in 10 states for multiple murders. Will they ever catch us? I doubt it, but they can have fun trying.
Author notes
I have no idea where this came from. I just went with it and decided to post it. I know it is unlike anything I have posted on here before. So what do you think?
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Comments
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Nice story, I liked it. The descriptions were very good..and..dark. I was hooked from the start.
You are a finalist
Great Job and good luck in my contest!
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A Mesmerizing, dark, and morbidly beautiful piece. You have a real knack for rich imagery and building up the suspense. I liked how you didn't overwhelm the story with description yet put in just enough detail to give your readers a taste. The ending was really fantastic...I think 90% of men in the world deserve that gruesome fate . This was a serious turn-on in a sick, fucked-up dirty bad girl kind of way, but I loved it *so* bloody much. Ecstatic to read more work from you, especially now that I know you're a little wildcat .
Much love,
Ink
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Thank you
Well, I can be one when I want to be. Just catch me in the right mood and it's hard to say what I could write, lol 
Thanks so much for your comments and the read.
~Joann
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Wow... This is amazing. You hooked me right from the beginning leaving me wanting more and more. Excellent flow and your descriptions are great. I mean, the visual I was getting... yikes! And in walked Jasper. Excellent twist. I thought he was long gone... surprise!! Sinfull demented and erotic.
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Wow, this was great. I didn't like the beginning as much as the rest, but the story grew on me after that. I feel like everything was a little too rushed, but that's an easy fix...just add more detail and slow things down. But I really did love the plot and the ending. It was definitely sick. Amazing job.
-jj
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wow this was amazing!!
Pretty cool although his wife is going to be upset when she finds out just how he was murdered,lol -
Wow...that is really demented!!! LOL but it was well written! Great Job!! -liz
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Wow their the murderers? That's awsome ^.^ I thought that Jasper was already out of her life but I didn't expect him the be her acomplise ^.^ nice job and thanks for entering in my conest ^.^
~Blackwings
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Great job. I really enjoyed reading this one. An original idea that you really managed to pull off. Well done.
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Nice. This had me smiling all the way through. I kept thinking, is she going there? Is she? And then you did. I was really happy you gave me the details. There really is no wrath in hell like that of a woman scorned. Stories like yours prove it. Nice work. I would have to read it again for grammar, because I thought it was written so well, I forgot to look after a while. Not for children, but definitely for the evil little child in all of us heh heh heh heh -
OH, GIZ! WHY? Man that would hurt! It sounded very nice until she got out the knife. Then I was starting to upchuck. Good story though, but I sure hope there isn't a second one. Okay, now how do you do a scared emoticon on this?
--RT (holding his unmentionables)
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LOL Thanks! I was laughing so hard when I read your comment. You know, I have no idea where this even came from. It's not my typical write at all. It just came to my mind that night, I went with it and ended up with something pretty wild to say the least. He he no part twos I don't think. Thanks RT
~Joann
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Oh selene this was absolutely delicious. The imagery in this piece was excellent and it kept me reading right up until the very end. Excellent write
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woah oh my god I think I am speechless! I can not believe you wrote this. wow. It's very good and I am shocked. lol!
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wow this is so cool! really interesting. great write!
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Wow, this was very intriging. I thought you did a great job on this story. Nasty as hell, but very good. Keep up the great work.
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whoa! great story! took me by surprise when she took out her knife and started cutting his stuff off though. but thats what makes it a good story- its wayyy different! bravo!
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Whoa. Hold your fire, or rather your knife! I like the new point of view and the new idea. I always like your writing it's not really the norm. Great job!
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this was excellent! really really good!
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Errmm...? I'm not sure what to make of this, it almost makes me feel bad for enjoying it. lol! Here i was thinking you were a nice girl although maybe a little on the dark side from your other stuff I've read. This was brilliant though, quite a twist at the end, I was expecting it to be a revenge against men for being screwed around by them sorta thing. Is it wrong of me that I sorta found it exciting? Maybe this could be an ongoing thing with other twisted exploits of this woman. Keep up the good work my lovely,
X Amber X
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Very naughty girl. I think you've been hanging around blair too much. lol. Very well done and very well written.
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Very cool!! This is a pretty intense subject to say the least but I was drawn to it. What does that say about me?? It was like a car accident that you have to slow down and look at. A sick, twisted part of me needed to read on. Some people might be afraid to write about something they think inside if it goes against the natural grain of what's acceptable - thanks for taking the plunge!
J
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.
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Wow that was actually wonderful. I just couldn't stop reading it. I was captivated by each line. Thanks so much and keep it up!
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Wow, I love this, truly I do. It's great.
It may not be unlike anything you've every written but it's fantastic and well written.
I wanted to keep reading to find out what would happen, what she would do to him.
I never guessed that she was still with the guy who had turned her bad, I thought it was a scorned lover thing..
Wow.
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Wow that was totally sick! I freakin' loved it! You get the gore, sex, blood, twisted, and dark all in the same story! Great Job!
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OH GOD...... I sure hope you are planning on sharing more of this with us..cause that was fucked up, SICK, PERVERTED, DARK...and a major fucking turn on
She is like doing thse families a favor in a way...but she gets the sex, she gets the trill and then has it all again over the dead bodies..oh woman..... u r so destined to write horrifying dark erotica...
Gotta give u hands up, three , if not ten cause whoa babe you blew me away..which is more than I can say for the dead guy...
Visions girl...mmmmmmm yummmmm
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