Beating me down

Hate, i'm feeling tired1

my time has gone today,2

I'm feelin suicide, 3

sometimes thats okay4

I'm here standing hollow5

falling away from me6

Your beating me down, 7

down into the ground8

Your beating me down9

where i'm lost and can't be found10

You walk away from me11

its falling away from me,12

FUCK, you hear me screaming13

while you go away,14

My life is crumbling down15

Making no sound16

as you beat me into the ground17

Your beating me down, 18

down into the ground19

Your beating me down20

where i'm lost and can't be found21

You stand there22

looking at me,23

at once was the person24

that you beat down,25

I get up and scream26

get back, get the fuck back27

Your beating me down, 28

down into the ground29

Your beating me down30

where i'm lost and can't be found31

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Just reliving my youth when i was bullied

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  • SnowFlakeWolf Greeters member
    April 26
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    This is pretty good. You have a way with words. Thank you for entering and good luck. ^_^


  • Pomodorina
    March 2
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    SAD

    This is really emotional and i loved the way you wrote it. It was a great read.