The Dark Vampire Angel One: Rebirth1
Kevan Rice wasn't your ordinary 21 year old he was consider a bad boy because he was different he were black shirts pants had tatoo's pries and always ware his dark hair in long braids.2
Kevan's mother and father tread him wrong because of his ways his father wanted him to stop using Wicca and stop being with his friends exspecaily his boyfriend Jaycee and his mother was afraid his life would get him killed. Like so many others they miss under stood him he was a good man who help others always was there for others and was the most sweatiest kindest man you ever met and every one who knew him true loved him as he was.3
"Come Kevan don't let them get too you. You knew hoe your parents are" side Jaycee who's tall with Short dark hair well built with brown eyes waring a leather jacket a shirt and pants with boots all black as he brace Kevan in his black jeep.4
"I knew but they pissies me off Jay why can they just love me for whom I;m " ? Says Kevan5
"Because they are selfish thinking about what others think instead of your feels. If they knew you true they would love you just like everyone else dose and me" says Jaycee6
"I love you too Jaycee dam I'm lucky" says Kevan he and Jaycee kissed and begins undressing another and was i the back of his jeep Jaycee moans as Kevan suck licked on his muscular hard chest bite and sucked on his nipples that got hard and moans more as he took his big hard manhood and all in and sucked him hard.7
Jaycee kissed Kevan hard and begins kissing his neck and shoulders all over his muscular chest sucking his nipples Kevan screams/ moans as he suck his big hard cock and fuck his face hard.8
Kevan then turn Jaycee around and barred his face into his ass once he was done tong fucking and eatting out his man pussly he placed his hard cock in to him and fucked him hard Jaycee screams as he dose.9
A few hours later after making love/ fucking Kevan and Jaycee too a walks and seen three guys jumping two others.10
"Fag"
"Peace of shit"11 "Dick Sucker"12
Is was hared Kevin ran for them13
"Kevan wait Kevan" says Jaycee be-hide him.14
"Get the fuck off them you mother fuckers" yells Kevan fighting15
"Are you too alright"? says Jaycee as the two youngster one with dark hair blue eyes and slender body from who's eyes was black and noise bleed shock his head yes the other who was shirt with brown hair green eyes screams in horror.16
"He has a gun" 17
gun shots were fired and the thugs runs off.18
"They got away I couldn't... says Kevan as he sees Jaycee and the other two guys over his body he was dead.19
"What's happening"? says Kevan20
" You are dead my little dark one" says this male with dark eyes dress in all black with dark wings fangs black nails.21
"No way I'm.. before he could finesses the man was on him biting his neck he awakes some times later lookinf and feeling diffrent.22
"What did you do to me?: says Kevan as he seen he had dark wings eyes fangs .23
"You have been chosen to be a Dark Vampire Angle" says the man smiling24
"No the fuck way I want to go back now" says Kevan25
"You cann't you are dead" said the man26
"You are lying tricking me.. before he could finesse the man show his furnal his parents friends and Jaycee even the two guys he help was there.27
"Oh my God I didn't knew he had so many peoples who loved and cared for him. Nor how true good he was I'm so sorry Kevan please forgive me" says his mother as she realize how wrong she was about her son28
"Mother" says Kevan29
"My son my miss under stood son Kevan I'm so sorry I was a fool not a good father to you I wish you were here I would tell you I'm prode of you so sorry" says his father30 31 Kevan cries as he watch it all.32
"Jaycee" says Kevan33
"My sweat like man I will always love you always" says Jaycee34
"No take me back make this not happening" says Kevan hitting the man who knocks him a side35
"You have a mission now and I will make sure you do it you must collect the souls of those who will die and help them cross over no more" says the man36
"Fuck you" says Kevan37
"You will do it or sure" says the man as he made Kevan's body burn he scream in pain38
"No one disobey the Angel Of Death my litte dark One" says the man39
"Don't call me that I'm Kevan" says Kevan40
"Not any more you are now call Kieran. Now here's your frist mission there will be a big atuomoebuild accent and you must gather the soul now go I will be watching" says the Angle Of Death41
Kevan was sent on a high way and seen these creatures with dark skin red eyes gremlin like features that disappears in smoke damaging vehicles that moved on he sees children's babies and other peoples including his family and Jaycee coming from his frunal42
"No no" he side flying toward then as a truck lossies control and sent the metal on it flying like spears into vechcial ripping into peoples and beheading them and making them loss eyes parts and crash into another.43
Jaycee and his family was safe but others were not so luck as they seen their dead bodies Kevan/ Kieran came to them after making sure his love ones were safe44
"Come it's time to go home" he says then a light came and they slowly crossed over and the light disappears.45
"Good work Kieran" says the Angle Of Death46
"What were those things?" ask Kevan47
" Reapers who keeps the line between death and life in check you will see more of them" says the Angle of Death48
" What about those?" says Kevan seeing souls different49
" Lost souls for you to feed on" says the Angle Of Death50
"What no way I want" Kevan scream inpain and his eyes glowed and he went and feed on the souls51
"You have no chosen my son once the hunger takes over you will feed only a master who knew how to control his/ her powers as a Dark Vampire Angle can fight and control. Now come there's work to be done still human never stop dieing" says the Angle of Death as he helps Kevan up and disappears.52
Sometimes later Jaycee return to Kevan's grave alone he place a photo of them togather.53
"I'll never stop loving you Kevan never" he says54
"I'll always will love you too Jaycee " says Kevan touching Jaycee face gently wiping the tears from his eyes he felt it. 55
"Kevan". says Jaycee56
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- Your Own DARK Vampire Angel by Prodigious.Mirth.
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Comments
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Alot of spelling mistakes but easily fixed good though
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THIS was kind of heart wrenching and sad and omg its like your my anglel, but you really cant be dead kind of bittersweat love.... had that aplocalyptic feel to it
Good job well done ^_^
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