Ambrosia... Saying her name even makes me weak in the knees. It is like a fine wine that just flows so freely from these lips of mine. She is every bit as gorgeous as her name sounds and no you can't have her! She is mine, all mine! I lay back on the bed as I touch myself, lost in thoughts of her. Just thinking of her makes me drip with passion. Her touch, her smile, everything... She is a goddess. A goddess that consumes my mind with each and every thought.1
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She is the most beautiful woman I have ever laid eyes on. She has the most alluring long, jet black hair. When she walks it sways back and forth across her slender back and those shoulders... Oh those shoulders... She is built like a beauty queen. Her body has the curves that would make anyone bow down and kiss the ground she walked on and they should. Her lips are so full and succulent. She gives the sweetest kisses. When she kisses me it makes me feel as if my body is being engulfed into a fiery oblivion. 3
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Ambrosia has a set of mystical, magical wings. Wings that expand out several feet and are the deepest shade of ebony. When she spreads her wings, they glitter in the moonlight as they are trimmed in a shiny silver. Her wings are so delicate. I love to run my hands gently over them and feel there pleasurable texture. She always wears black clothes and might I add, she looks damn sexy in black! She has this one dress that makes me hot every time I see her with it on. Her voice has the most feminine sound to it hearing it makes my heart flutter. She is my dark angel, my true love, my savior. 5
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I would be dead if it wasn't for my sweet Ambrosia. She saved me at a time in my life when I had no one. I was alone in this world. I had been used, tormented, tortured, humiliated. I had lost everything and was ready to end my life. I did end my life, but at the very last moment. She pulled me back from the brink of permanent death by making me an immortal being. A creature of the night. A vampire. In turn I was hers forever, for eternity. Oh how I loved being hers forever.7
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An eternity with Ambrosia is so much sweeter than life as a mere mortal could have ever been. She treats me with respect and dignity. If there is ever a time I am feeling sad, she wraps me tight in her wings and holds me until my tears subside. She is my lover, my angel, my entire world. Without her, I would be nothing. 9
It was at first a little hard to get use to being a vampire, but I adjusted rather fast. Thanks to her that is. She has already taught me so much in such a short period of time. She fills my mind like a dark abyss. A dark abyss that I can't get enough of. I can hear her divine voice as she calls my name out from the hall.10
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I feel my desire start to burn inside of me. I know what time it is and I know that tonight I am in for a real treat. I smile as my angel walks through the bedroom door. Dressed in only her black lace night gown. She smiles at me as our eyes lock together. She moves to the bed like a cat, so graceful. I pull her down as I kiss her thick lips with deep hunger. The feel of her teeth as they sink into my skin makes me shudder with passion. Tonight is ours...12
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Have you ever made love to an angel? There is nothing like it in the world. Angels, even dark angels, make the best lovers. Ambrosia will be mine tonight and every night until the end of eternity. We are soul mates, destined to be together by fate. I love her and I am thankful to be safe in the arms of my dark angel. My immortal lover. My sweet Ambrosia.
Author notes
*Contest entry for dark angels*
I used a variation of the name Ambrose. Since the angel is a female, I decided on Ambrosia.
A contest entry
- Your Own DARK Vampire Angel by Prodigious.Mirth.
350 points, ended March 4, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think... Comments are much appreciated :)
Comments
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Very nice :! Although writing about vampires is not really my thing I do enjoy reading about them occasionally. This was really well written and your descriptions were so vivid that I could easily see her standing before me. The thing I liked the most was the repetition of her name in certain places because it kind of left the impression that just thinking her name was enough to see his love and gratitude for her.
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Wow
Very different, but so romantic at the same time. I loved your imagery, it was very vivid, and I have a very definate image of Ambrosia now in my mind, your writing flowed very well, and it was very smooth.
Well done, keep it up!
~Miranda
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Wow. This is really good, I love the descriptions and how you used a kind of story you already had heard of to create something else. Wow. Just wow.
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Interesting imagination...
...smiles, I did it again, wrong key, now have to edit. Very well written, dark, horror, vampires...not my thing, but I wanted to read something more of yours.
Good write...
Amicus...
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Errrm!
I like it.
It is a wee bit hard on the concentration but that is easily fixed up with a little paragraphing here and there.
The srory is excellent and I like the style in which you have written it.
All the best.
jsdk
beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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Oh darn! I wish I had your ebony wings on my vampire angel! Excellent reading, a dark love story!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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wow i dont know eaht ot say well any i love it dark love it
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Yay!! Wonderfully dark and delicious. Good luck in the contest.
Brooke
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This was the most beautifully written, erotically driven story about the love for an angel I have ever seen and to be honest I think its just astounding the way you wrote it... full of love and compassion and yearning and emotion
Thank you so dearly for a wonderfull read.
GOOD LUCK AND THANKS FOR ENTERING...
your in the finalist list for sure ^_^
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ooo, very erotic and very beautiful. Who said those who are dark can't love or be loved? I love this one very much. Found your language in it to be of the utmost exotic. Loved it!
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This was gresat. the end made me a little uncomfortable because it seemed a little sacriligious but hey! shes a vampire1 its in their nature. i really enjoyed this one. good job!
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This story just drove me to want more. This is very fantastic and I loved every minute of reading it very well done.
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