Standing outside, she was resting in her trunk, and I was standing, facing her. It was Halloween, and the air was blowing through us both. She has to fingers slid into my front pockets, and uses them to periodically pull me into her, but I keep pulling back. It's like a tug of war..and I'm the rope. We had been dating only a week. Still no first kiss. My first kiss with anyone awaited me. She wanted me to make the first move, so we could be sure I was ready. I wanted to make the first move. Yeah, like that was happening. I wanted to push myself to do it, but I couldn't. She was looking at me, her head cocked to the side and her lips in almost a perfect line, but it was turned so slightly upward that you just had to know she was smiling. She was staring at me. Those big brown eyes. Just staring at me. It made me nervouse. I knew what she was thinking. I had known the whole night. She wanted to kiss me. She was going to kiss me. So I started talking. Alot. I rambled on about everything, and she just stared at me some more. I could tell in her head she was just willing me to just shut the hell up. I knew it was going to happen. I could feel my heart beating fast inside my chest; inside my whole body. My body pulsed with that heartbeat. Oh boy. oh boy. I couldn't think. She was going to kiss me. And she was a girl. Shit. I couldn't think and yet a million things raced through my mind. What was it going to be like? I kept talking. Stalling her. I needed to prepared myself. She pulled me in though. She pulled me in with my own pockets. Our lips met. My heart was pounding now and I couldn't breath. I didn't know my heart could beat that fast and that loud. Her lips were soft and warm..and I wanted to keep kissing her, but I didn't know how. So I pulled away. Damnit. Why did I do that? I start rambling again, this time admiting that I ramble when I get nervous. She laughs and shakes her head at me. Then she goes back to staring at me. With those damn big beautiful brown eyes. I can't look her straight in the eyes. She makes me nervous, but in a good way. I never know what to expect with her. We've only been dating a week and she makes me nervous. I lean in and kiss her though. Wow. I kissed her. Her mouth opens slightly and it scares me because I don't know what I'm doing again, but I fumble along. Lips. I like her lips. I love her lips. I pull away again. 2 short kisses. That's all she got tonight. But it was our first kiss. They were short. But it was perfect. I still couldn't breath though. Small kiss. But I can't breath. How odd. She shows me no emotion, but I just assume she's probably as estatic as I am. Ok. Well maybe not that happy. Because that was my first kiss in general. But it was so perfect. I want to cry and scream and run around in circles. I hug her instead. And tell her I love her. It feels like love. It feels like dying too because I still can't breath. Oh well. It feels like a first kiss. And I like it.1
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My first kiss with my girlfriend. True story. -Giggles-
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"She was going to kiss me. And she was a girl. Shit"
i remever that almost exact thought..which now seems so distant.
this piece is cute & innocent
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Awww! hehehe this is so cute! ^^
hehehehe I love it...thankies for the link. ^^
btw it's not dorky...it's sweet!
Love and light,
Jenna -
that was so sweet. i loved it! i remember my first kiss with my gf. i was sooo nervous but i soon got over it
awsome write, keep it up.
Hidden Angel
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mmmmmm! excellent! i love the repetition- like thinking
kudos! -
Brilliant
Beautifully written! I can almost hear your heart racing too! Wow, its so rare to read such an honest story that describes that sensation so perfectly. It has me remembering my first kiss. Absolutely wonderful work! -
Loved every line!!!
I love this story. As I read it, I remembered my first kiss. That was one of my most memorable experiences. I am going to bookmark this write and I'll be looking for more of your work. Nice job!! -
AWWWWW!!!
that is so cute!..first kisses always get you nerves unless if it's a true or dare thing then that doesnt really count..lol I like that story alot!..
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oh wow i commented on this back in december!
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This is such an innocent, sweet little piece - like elementary school or playground romance. Good luck in the contest - will there ever be more?
~Elsie -
Yay!!! Sweetness
Very sweet, the lines flowed good, went well together. I just kissed someone today, it was very sweet. Ah, young love. In an attempt to answer Chumbawumba's question, it can be wonderful... with the right person. But the wrong person, it can be horrible. kiss the wrong person, and, also, never take advice from someone else.
-Someone Else -
KISSable..ha. Bad Joke, I know.
Very good. I have never kissed/been kissed. Is it really that great? -
2 thumps up
so emotional, and in depth. i love it! and i know the feeling, anyways keep writing and ill keep looking in. Peace and love
Rocker -
And tell her I love her. It feels like love. It feels like dying too because I still can't breath. Oh well.
i like those lines, lol, theyre kinda funny. great story, i like it a lot and im bookmarking it. awesome write!
~Karinn
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thats so sweet, and i really feel like i can relate (for once, i always have a hard time relating to love stories, but my girlfriend and i have been together for a couple weeks and recently shared our first kiss. kind of like this situation). great feeling expressed in a great story
julie -
Aww...that is so sweet! I happened to come across this somehow and I love it. I myself am bi and love stories like this. Good work and please do more. Good luck.
Nobody tells all he knows...
-Koneko
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