Like... Love (Poem)

Like a ship on an ocean1

You have my complete devotion2

Like the light of a gifted star3

I close my eyes and there you are4

Like the colors of a rainbow5

You keep my love aglow6

Like a promise one should keep7

You're my dreams when I sleep8

Like the feeling in my heart9

I shall always love you near or far

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Two people who are two ships on an ocean waiting for that time where they will anchor together

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  • Real RainGirl 2
    September 20
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    this is beautiful! oh how i have missed poetry. keep writing for me to read!


  • poeticweaver
    July 9
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    A very sweet poem that shares one's loving dreams and heart!
    Thanks for weaving this, I enjoyed bro, peace.

    Bro Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    July 16, 2008

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    This is a really cute poem. Seriously. I loved the visual I got from it and everything. Well done. =)

  • taylor paige
    February 29, 2008

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    AWWW... so cute!! I love love poems! It paints a picture in your head of you and that other special someone in your life...AMAZING... keep it up!


    • Ted E Bare
      February 29, 2008
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      Taylor Paige, thank you for such a very wonderful commentTed E


  • WingedWolf
    February 28, 2008
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    cute. i love you.


  • joleahe
    February 27, 2008

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    awwww its beautiful! I love love poems lol.. great job Ted e bare!


  • TheBlueRoad
    February 26, 2008

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    Oh, this is beautiful! I hope these two people like ships will meet each other. I like the symbols you used. Clever!

    thanks for entering my contest.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 26, 2008

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    Awww that is such a beautiful poem and I hope that those two ships will one day meet and anchor themselves together It sounds like such a great love and this is written with such a heartfelt conviction.
    ~Joann


  • SympatheticMisery
    February 26, 2008
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    Aww, that's so cute! I hope that your two ships anchor together, and don't have to sail away! :3


  • RegalTheft
    February 26, 2008

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    I really hope those two ships meet eachother. They sound like a great couple.

    --RT

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