Black Hearted World

You think its fine. You think its ok, but believe me its not. It all begins with a normal girl living in a black hearted world. Her troubles start with a fight with her dad. He got mad at her for no reason, but before she could deffend herself he slaped her in the face thinking it was punishment. She went to bed with tears in her eyes from where he hit her four times. the next week was when she went to school thinking she'd be cool, but no she was strange and werid with those bruises up her arms and on her face. So insted of being cool she became the outcast of the school, but then the rich girls came along think it would be fun to hurt her pride. So they said they'd be her friend but insted they always used her. One day she disobeyed them and tried to escape them, but all they did was hurt her more till she could barley stand it. She was fed up with it all and didn't know how to get rid of the anger. She found a knife and picked it up, but then the worst came to her. She sliced as fast as she could across her wrist and saw what it has done. It made a thin line that began to leak blood. She was so happy but also in pain. She couldn't tell her mom or dad. She couldn't tell her friends. She was left alone everytime she felt so horrible. now even at the age of 14 she See's all her scars shes left behind. her scars from four years of this may ham and torror, but still is in such of her home......1

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  • Co-Co-Cola
    June 27, 2005
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    I can deifinitely relate to the outcast part. It's truly sad when people have to go through these kind of things.


  • AnaisBlack
    December 2, 2004
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    This story definitely captures the readers attention. I think you could draw the story out some more and add more adjectives, but it gets the point across. It kept me reading on...


  • no1special
    December 1, 2004
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    This is a really great story. I have friends who's life is kinda like that and it really afects them and the people around them. Good job on capturing the amotion!
    Keep up the goo work!
    ~no1special~

  • bloodsponge420
    December 1, 2004
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    wow... almost that same exact thing happened to me. great job.