We have messed up our planet!

We are here on this planet for a reason. Isn’t it odd that humans thrive on a planet that suits their needs perfectly? Think about it: the Earth’s distance from the sun puts it at the perfect temperature for life to survive. It’s tilt causes Earth to have seasons so that any preference is met. We are not here because of God. We are here for a greater purpose than to destroy our homes with pollution and war. This Earth is our homeland. We must protect it. It can be said that we are not here just to save our Earth from destruction. Well, of course. We should never have polluted it in the first place. But before we can move on to our greater destiny that is set in the stars, we must save our planet from the plague we have let loose on it’s surface.

A contest entry

yeah i no a little creepy but whatever.

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  • sport-gurl-101
    June 10, 2008

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    Amen!

    lol i totally agree some people know and do not care so the do noting awareness is key and so is action!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • x-sweet-sunshine-x
    March 2, 2008
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    hehe

    I forgot the clappy dudes

    beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 5.


  • x-sweet-sunshine-x
    March 2, 2008
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    Wow

    great entry! Luv phe

    beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 5.


  • StarIlluminated
    February 26, 2008

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    Sweet story!!!! And yes I know you are Lilli haha. Good argument, very very well written story. I like the length haha. But really really well done and good luck in the contest!
    *KT*