Missing you

Grandma...Why did you have to go?,
I miss you in a way,
that is indescribable to say,
I think about you all night and day,1

Why did you have to go?
I love how you used to hug me,
but now that you are gone,
i feel like a faun,
that has lost his parents,2

Why did you have to go?
but i love you so much,
and how do i get in touch?
because cancer took you away,
from the ones that loved you most,3

Why did you have to go?
i just want you to hold me in your arms,
and tell me everything will be better,
and that you are ok,4

I miss you so much,5

Why did you have to go?6

Before i go,7

I just want you to know that,8

i think about you and i miss you alot,9

and i would rather be with you,10

than in this horrible place called earth,11

I WANT TO GO,12

I WANT TO GO WITH YOU,13

TAKE ME AWAY,14

WITHOUT YOU,15

LIFE IS INCOMPLETE,16

AND I HAVE NO PURPOSE,17

i want to go!!!!18

Why did you have to go?19

I want to go!!!
Why did you have to go????20

I WANT TO GO!!!21

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In memory of Grandma- i wish you were here with me

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  • Twilight-Lover
    May 4
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    Great

    I hope our comments give you strength and yes...I'm crying from your poem...


  • Twilight-Lover
    May 4

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    Wow....:(

    I'm so sorry. I lost my best friend to cancer. He was only 13 at the time and I felt the same way..I just wanteds to turn back time or suffer with him...or die for him
    I know it sucks, but things will improve...just takes time.
    [Featherstream give a hug]
    Great and emotional well done. I'd write Cody a poem if I was any good..for now I'll just have to wait. Good-job anyways


  • Taylor Renee
    March 4

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    Aw!





    Sweetie, I'm sorry!

    But you made me cry, too

    Very emotional.

    It does NOT suck, Chantal! It's really good. Rhyming poems are hard, and you did very well!

    Nice plot, of course, though sad. And the flow was pretty good, too.

    Your wording wasn't bad, either.

    You did totally well


    Good job!!

    Don't ever make me cry again!!!!




    xoxox
    -♥-
    Renee


  • Pomodorina
    March 3
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    SO SWEET

    I love this. It is really sad and emotional. And remeber, believe in yourself!!


  • Princess Peaches
    February 28
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    I like this


  • Wendy Elizabeth
    February 26

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    damn you chey, TT_TT

    i friggin hate you now! this poem just made me cry, and i never cry!!! it's really good though! i like it...but still... TT_TT


  • Lynn of the Forest gold member
    February 25
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    Very good

    I understand how you feel about 17 years ago. I lost my dad from cancer too. I still missed and I always will. Keep writing out your feelings.

    Suggestions:

    Change the background color makes it very hard to read.

    i think about you and i miss you (alot(

    * alot change to a lot.

    Great job!

    Lynn

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