One day a very long time ago, there were two very loving people. One was a guy, and he was really into anything that had to do with water. He suddenly came upon a girl swimming alone in the water. He came up to her, and they started to talk. A few minutes later, the girl had a daughter and decided to name her Jennifer, for she thought that was the greatest name a girl could have.1
Well, the guy had to leave and took me with him, on the land. Away from the water and my mom who was a mermaid. A few days later, I had grown so fast that I now was a teen and was as tall as my house that I lived in. I decided to go swimming in the ocean, and to my surprise I saw a lot of girls swimming with fins. I looked down at myself and to my surprise, I had started growing fins and was now a mermaid. I found my mom and the rest of my mermaid family, and I loved it so much that I never went back to my house and lived with my mom down in the sea and never saw my dad again. I never even knew if he tried to look for me or not either.2
As the days went on, I found I had the best power ever- I could make objects move and fly by just thinking it and by moving my eyes too. It made me so happy that I could do that. Everyone in the village was so jealous of me. I had the sweetest personality of anyone. I was always nice and sweet to anyone who knew me. I had skin as soft as a baby's skin, hair as soft as silk and had eyes as blue as the sky, when there is no clouds, just a clear blue sky.3
One day, I met up with a girl who I really did not know but had seen before. She told me she would kill me because she thought that I thought I was better than anyone else was. I talked to her and tried to convince her of this but the girl would not listen to me. So finally I got really livid at her and told her to leave me alone or I would make her wish she was never born. That girl just wouldn't believe me, so I decided to make her fly in the air by moving my eyes. The girl changed her mind as she was going as high as skyscrapers were, so she believed me and never doubted me again after that incident.4
The next day, I decided to go on land and visit my dad whom I haven't seen in years. At last, I found the castle where he was located. When I saw it, I was so surprised, the building was so high, it touched heaven and went even higher than heaven, to outer space beyond earth, and you could see all the planets in the universe too. Well I decided I wanted to go inside that castle and go up the stairs past heaven and go into outer space to see if I could find him. On my way up, I did not see him at all but I had to climb the stairs to get up past heaven. Finally, I made it and when I got there I saw Ursula, the sea monster that had lived in the sea where I am from. She came up to me and tried to fight me but with my powers, she had no chance at all. She came at me with her claws. Instantly, I looked at her with my eyes and I concentrated on her for a few minutes until she suddenly started to rise in the air. She kept trying to get out of my grip by looking back at me into my eyes and she almost got out of my grip but then I concentrated harder with my eyes on her face and her eyes. This went on for several weeks until suddenly she gave up and let me go on my way.5
After that, I went down from the heaven into my father's castle and decided to look for him again. I started to look around but found so many doors, I wondered how I would ever find him. I went to the first door I came to and opened it. I saw a tank filled with human brains, I decided to watch to see what was happening. To my horror, brains rose from their tank, noticed me and started coming at me. I was shocked, frozen in fear from seeing this happen right in front of my eyes, I couldn't move. Then suddenly, I realized that unless I got out of there, I would die right there instantly. Then I moved and I didn't feel scared anymore and bolted from there and went outside the door.6
I rested for a few minutes, catching my breath from what I had just seen behind the door. Then I decided to try another door, the one right next to the one with the brains. I opened the next door with caution, wondering what could be behind this door. When I got inside, I noticed that the room was all red. The door, the wallpaper, everything in the room was all red. This seemed strange to me. After a few mintues of just standing there, I heard a hissing sound. To my horror and my surprise, I saw an anaconda all the way across the room, looking at me, hungry and wanting me. I knew all about anacondas and what they do to their prey, so I realized instantly I had to get out of there. As I started running toward the door, the huge snake slithered toward me, really fast, as fast as a cheetah runs. But I was faster than the snake and had gotten a head start. I made it through the door right away. 7
I took a few deep breaths and went to the next door. I heard a guy behind it, talking to someone. For some reason, this reminded me of my dad. I opened the door, and to my surprise, it was him. he looked exactly the way he did, many years ago. He was so happy to see me, I felt so sad from all the years I missed seeing and being with him, I decided I was going to live with him, to catch up on what we had lost from me disappearing like I did. He surprised me by saying he would love it for all of us to live in the ocean together, so thats what we did. My family and I lived together in the ocean happily forever. We had a fun life together, as a family.8
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something i had to do for my writing class, a tall tale where im the hero and the main person in the story and had to have events happen with a villain and had to have a super hero power with figurative language in it. i got 95 out of 100 on it. tell me what u think of it!
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its cool. I like the whole fantacy idea yet its probably true.
