Blood Runs So Deep (A Wolf Poem)

In the night,1

a howl makes itself heard.2

Through the silhouettes of trees,3

he roams.4

Through the water,5

he wades further.6

In his blood,7

desire courses in his veins.8

Beneath his skin,9

his soul aches for a fulfillment.10

Under the full moon,11

the man run and has gone away.12

Before the crack of the dawn,13

the man comes back, wholesomely satisfied.14

In the day,15

he waits for the night.16

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  • Squirt05
    March 17, 2008

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    I love how you can picture it in your mind. It is amazing. It is very good, oh my its super good. good job and good description.


  • Blazing Writer
    March 5, 2008

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    Ooooooooooooo me like this a lot. Haha. I was reading it outloud with a raspy voice like an evil person. Lol sounds like it could be the beginning to a show. Like Buffy the Vampire Slayer. The first few episodes. Like that lol.

    !Blazing Mike!


  • ice wolf Greeters member
    March 3, 2008
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    really good. i love the imagery


  • Amicus2K9
    February 25, 2008

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    Ah, a werewolf myth arises!

    Well done...ah, being drawn to the night...sighs...I once upon a time thought I might be one of those, 'night creatures' of some mythical lore, turns out I just best when the world is quiet...


    Nice...thank you...

    Amicus...



  • JuliaAlexandrovna
    February 25, 2008
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    I like what you've done with this. I don't quite see how it's a "wolf poem" though.

    x Julez

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