Immediately she pushed herself from underneath the car and heaved the acid vomit that could no longer remain sitting inside her throat.2
Dark One Angel turned around, hearing her groaning as she released all the sickness she had suffered. Her battle had prevailed, with the help of her Dark One Angel.3
Still clutching the vile, putrid heart of the man he had so brutally murdered in the name of his lover, his Queen. He walked around the side of the car, kneeling on his knees in front of Marie.4
She looked up at him, he could smell her blood and see that it had blackened, he smiled a smile of forgiveness and triumph, her demons had been expelled from her soul. She was now a pure Angel.5
He brushed back her hair softly, placing the heart beside him, and held he cheeks lovingly, wiping away her tears.6
“Why did you do that?” she asked softly, whispering as if not to wake the demonic man that lay most definitely there to rest, in the eternal fires of hell where he belonged.7
“Because My Queen to set you free, I needed the heart of Satan's demon inside my hand, tangled between my fingers for you to see, for you to feel that this torture is over, and can never be again, so that you may never feel that kind of hurt again, and so that he may never hurt another like you.”8
She closed her eyes, breathing in his touch, masking her guilt, trying ever so hard not to get lost inside pity for the man that had caused her so much grief, and who had wanted to take her life in the most inhumane way.9
“I know Marie you are a compassionate Angel, you are inside feeling regret, remorse, hurt and maybe even pleasant feelings, feelings of release, it will change in time, those bad feelings will pass and you will realize you are free.”10
He picked up the heart, in his hand, extending another and ushered her to her feet, holding tightly onto her waste.11
“Come fair maiden, Queen of mine you must let go of this pain once and for all, throw it deep into the unknown murky abyss below these mountains, so that his heart may feel the frosty coldness of a harsh inflicted death and so that his soul may feel the pain that it caused yours.”12
She shook her head.13
“I can't, that would be murder, what if they find me, I cannot be a murderer.”14
He walked her to the edge, taking her hand, and placed the still warm heart in her hands.15
“I have done my part my Queen, Now you must do yours.”
Author notes
This might not be the end of The Dark one Angel so never fear... this may be the chapter of a new beginning, most definitely you will see The Dark One Angel again :)
As for Now I Liked this ending actually... I think it said all it needed to say in a nicer way and i left it at the right place :)
*love* let me know what you think
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ZOOOOOMG! I read this all today and I got to this song and MCR's 'I Never Told You What I Do For a Living' came on and I thought that it went perfectly with the end of this! Good job Blair!
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I too a gree continue it or leave there it's good eaither way.
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Holy &*!$
This was good and yeah, you could continue it or leave it there. Your choice. Good job!
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I agree
Continue or not, it has a good conclusion. It can easily be extended of course but I suspect that it then require several more segments to again reach a conclusion.

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Another great ending and very well written fantastic read this was really good and i loved it very much keep it up.


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I love this ending. I think that is a powerful end to this awesome story. It leaves things said perfectly! Now I must sit and wait patiently on the next dark one angel series he he
This was a wonderful story all the way through and I loved each and every chapter. I think that you really brought out a lot of passion through out this one. Amazing job! You are such a talented writer.
~Joann






