The speech of my life

I stare at the one that loves me as i sit there in silence. The words were about to come out until tears started to run down my cheek. I knew what i wanted to say but i froze with the fear of what he might think of me. But i said it anyways:1

" Baby, i need to tell you something. you know i love you right? well i need to tell you something that i have been wanting to say for a while now. I know you want to marry me and to have a family one day. And i want to with all my heart. And i want you to know something. before you can in my life i had so much doubt. doubt about if i would ever find the one i would spend the rest of my life with. i then took a vow with myself that my heart would belong to me. i tried to give my heart away so many times but it only got crushed and broken. I then said i would never get married because it ends with feud and hatred. Everything that i wanted in a relationship i was then throwing away. But when i met you everything i vowed suddenly disappeared and i let my boundary line fade away. i broke a promise to myself for you and i have no regret about that. I love you sweetie with all my heart and being your wife you'd make all my dreams come true. And i have a wedding present for you."2

I then took his hand and placed it gently on my stomach to let him know our baby child was growing in me at that very moment. We both cried and got married the next week.3

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  • Woodland Nymph09
    December 29, 2004
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    awesome

    This is absolutely beautiful!Beautiful peice and you put it down just as well in words.I hope you have lots of happiness with your love and family.Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poems and advice~Take care.

    mymuseisvig

  • PerfectStranger
    November 30, 2004
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    I thought this was very nicely written. And I just love the subject of it. It was like after reading it I just went AWWE!! hehe.. nice write.

  • pattyann4500
    November 30, 2004
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    Well, it turned out beautifully then. My blessings for your family. Hugs, Patricia