Pure (a haiku)

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An entry for the LOVE OR HATE POEM contest, this is a poem about hatred. Just hatred. Okay?

A contest entry

• LOVE OR HATE POEM by TheBlueRoad. 325 points, ended March 1, 13 entries
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest
• I SURPRRRY AT YOUR FAB HAIKU. by brittanyshanae. 350 points, ended July 5, 16 entries
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

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  Ted E Bare
  February 27
  
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  I better watch out what I drink around here or I may become a very Dead Ted E Bare(lol). Sweet Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
  
  Ted E

  
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  Kat222
  February 24
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  ain't that the truth! not really into poetry but anyone can relate to this. Really great

  
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    Viola.King
    February 24
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    Thanks so much for the comment!
• ablelaz
  February 23
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  short

  Its not bad, but there isn`t enough of it to form an opinion. My advise is to sit down and write the other three verses.
• • ablelaz
    February 23
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    Yes

    I`m sorry, but I was one of the ones who thought it was just short.
    Talk to you soon---ablelaz.
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      Viola.King
      February 23
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      Well, it's a haiku, so I can't really just add extra verses to it, or it would ruin the point. Thanks for the advice, regardless!
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  Gary Alexander
  February 23
  
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  Quite Good!

  Congratulations...not only for a decent Haiku...but one with the correct number of syllables in each line (5,7, 5)
  Many are unaware of this...and think it's only a "short poem!"
  Good one!
  GA

  
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  TheBlueRoad
  February 23
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  Wow, that was good!