My entry

When I hear this song, I think of someone who has been extremely hurt emotionally so she has stopped herself from those sort of feelings. She has found someone who loves her, and is trying to love him, but she has stopped herself for so long that she can't any more. This is her trying to say she loves him, and asking him to help her to feel again.

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  • UnEdibleChick
    February 24, 2008

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    Which song is it? Well, anyway, I might enter this contest. I just have to choose a song. Good job, although I don't know what song your talking about


  • emperess27
    February 23, 2008

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    Ok, this is good. A bit short, but hey, it is your thoughts on the song so that does not matter. I juust wonder who hurt her so badly all that time ago who stopped her from loving. Anyway, good luck in my contest. Kais =)