The Love dazed First Kiss

We snuck off, the moonlight as our guide, where it was private and safe, where we could be alone. We walked cooly, him dancing on his tiptoes. I laugh when he does that, I love when you do that. We held each other, one arm around each others waist, my head on his shoulder. We stopped behind a huge building...1

We stood and sighed.2

"So, what you want to do?" I asked.3

"whatever you want, Im not the one in charge" He replied rocking back in forth on his toes.4

He always did that, always letting me, the amature take the lead, what was I supposed to do, give him a hug and leave?5

"hmmm..." I giggled.6

"What?" he giggled in return.7

"I don't want to make the first move, the guy is supposed to do that..."8

He sighed, smiled into the night, and stood in front of me.9

"Close your eyes.."10

I closed them..feeling more than one emotion at once. happiness, excitement, nervousness, and  girlish laughter making it's way to the surface of my face. When he was coming in, it was slow at first, at the end it sped up, and then it happened. His lips touched mine..they were so soft, slippery, and smooth. They tensed on my lips, I kissed back, finally brought to reality. Several kissed took there place, soft smacking sounds of a first kiss. I opened my eyes and saw the look on his face..it was so....Vacant in itself, contient, happy..trusting. I loved him. Then his wet lips parted, and his tongue slid in, invited nonetheless. I couldn't wait for it to chase mine into the darkness of my depth, and Mine into his. We sucked on each others flesh for 10 seconds or so and with a last kiss and another smacking sound, he released.11

"How was that babe?" he asked, smiling. I wondered if it was what he expected, I didn't want to disappoint my love.12

"hmmm.." I smiled, satified and love dazed.13

We held each other and I could smell the cologne on his flesh. that  forever scented cologne that never left my nose. I loved him, and we were in love. That first kiss was everything that I had hoped it to be.14

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This is a beautiful story I made up! ah, a first kiss...loving and hopeful

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  • LostSoulOfRage
    October 16, 2006
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    this is pretty good, i like it.

    but u have typos in it,

    but other tha that its really good!

    great job!


  • December 5, 2004
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    Ohhh so sweet! I liked this for it reminded me of a few first kisses Lovely
    Keep up the good work.


  • December 5, 2004
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    Sorry too dark to read for my eyes..maybe you could lighten your font with such a dark background
    Edited on Dec 05, 10:41 p.m. because ''.


  • December 5, 2004
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    nice story, i'd read it over again to edit though, doesn't read right.


  • Rose Dark Thorn
    November 30, 2004
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    This is a really pretty story. There are a few typos and I couldn't quite understand one of the sentences in the first paragrahp, but other than that, it was pretty good.

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