Kale was sitting on the beat up old couch waiting for his friends to pick him up for wrestling practice when his older brother Todd came running into the room.
"Sup bro, you seen my Adidas sweatshirt? I can't find it anywhere,"
"Uuuuuuh you checked on your couch under all your crap?"
"Dude, I think your right!" As Todd rushed up the stairs Kale heard his ride pull in the drive.
"See ya!" he yelled up the stairs.
"Later!" Todd yelled in response as Kale walked out the door. Kale climbed inside the car that definetley did not have enough room for 5 really big teenage boys.
"Hey guys"
"Sup Kale," they said in unisene. The guys Gary, Mike, Davino,
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bout my bros far from dun and dont have time 2 work on it so itl be dun when its dun
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Uh Dont swear as much. It sounds funny but other than that good. Keep working on it! Get better soon too!
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hey but my bros do swear that much.... maybe not in front of u but to me they do
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The start is really good, will come back when you add more, just let me know! -Liz
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Nice start, will be back to read as you add more
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hmm wonder where this came from? lol. Good start keep working at it.
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