The Dark One Angel - *Eight*

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The sun began to burn , seeping through his silk like clothing. The heat accelerating with each vast ray of sunlight that shone brutally upon him.2

He was nearing closer, he could feel it, he could feel Marie's cry for help echoing through his body, he could feel her anger and pain.3

“Please make him stop...Angel please make him stop...Come and save me.”4

soaring through the trees, over the lonely highway, twisted around the snow caped mountains he spotted the car up in the distance, It's red exterior flashing in the sunlight, in the mirror he could see Marie, the man glooming over her. In his hand a sharpened knife, covered in blood.5

“I'm coming Marie, just hold on... I am almost there.”6

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“You all done,” he asked, sliding the knife into the compartment under his chair.8

Whimpering and sniveling with frightened tears of hatred and fear, she nodded. Hoping to god that she would make it through the day.9

“Oh I have had enough torturing you for now, your all covered in blood and thats just the way I like it, makes me all the more... Mm hungry for your youthful flesh, now take that shirt of and rub those beautiful pretty breast of yours.”10

She shook her head, mistakenly. She did not think, nor was she able to breath calmly without feeling as if her heart would explode in her chest, She had just made another mistake, a bigger one this time and she knew she was most certainly in for it this time around.11

“Did you just shake you head at me?” he growled, aggressively, grabbing her wrist, and wrenched her forward, slamming her head on the metal rod of the seats.12

Blood immediately poured from her head, her now fresh wound dripped her crimson pain down her cheeks and into her mouth, covering her swollen lips with that salty taste of deceit.13

Lifting her head back up he raised his fist in the air and punched her fair in the nose, cracking the bone.14

“Now listen when I tell you to take your your shirt of you will take your shirt of you disobedient piece of filth, now take it off.”15

Holding her nose high in the air, she tried to sustain the large amount of blood that was seeping from every wound he had created. She could feel herself getting weaker and weaker. She needed relief, she needed more blood in her system. She could feel herself dying inside and the excruciating pain was starting to become unbearable.16

Somehow though, deep inside of her a little voice echoed telling her to stay calm, to sit tight and soon everything would be over. She would be just fine.17

Slowly she peeled of her blouse, letting it fall to her waste, and cupped her breast in her hands, Blood had already dripped onto her breast and had covered her nipples completely and as she began to massage and caress them lightly, he reached forward, his mouth hovering over her nipples and bit hard into them, lapping and sucking up the blood.18

“STOP,” she screamed as he bit harder, and harder, forcing her hand down on her breast. The pain was to much it felt as if he was trying to bite them of.19

Suddenly he pulled back pushing her against the car door and grabbed her thighs, spreading them hard against the door.20

“If you think I am going to stop just because you beg me you've got another thing coming... just you wait, by the time I am finished with you, death will seem like utter bliss.”

Author notes

Hope it is alright

I am suffering a mental block at the moment..I start thinking and when I wrote it comes out lame... So I hope this is not to lame...

Love you all Blair

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  • SeleneStone gold member
    February 22

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    Yikes I hope the dark angel gets there soon! Oh my gosh this part was packed full of drama. That sick bastard needs his eyes poked out.
    ~Joann


  • DarkOneShadow silver member
    February 22

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    Whoa... deep

    Though why isn't the guy coming to the rescue? What is taking him so long or are you just leaving us in suspense?

    DarkOne