“Miss Harriet chapel, please come forward.”1
“What has the jury decided?”2
“Your Honor the Jury finds the defendant guilty.”3
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I never understood why a court could put a woman away for assaulting a man. Not only a man but her husband for sure.5
Getting raped and beaten and tortured every day seemed to play no significance what so ever in this cruel sick game they liked to play justice.6
In their eyes I was a murderer, guilty as charged.7
And while I did not deny any facts that I killed my husband, they can sure as hell rest in peace knowing that he is out of this world, and he will never, ever lay his slimy, filthy hands on another innocent woman.8
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“Jury finds the defendant guilty, 4 years in Harpers womans prison, no probation, case dismissed.”10
“THIS IS SICK... your all sick perverts letting a man get away with rape.”11
“police please take her away.”12
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Not even a final last word.14
Not a word of remorse and it makes you wonder doesn't it, if it was their daughters or their sisters would they not do the same thing.15
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“You all can just rot in hell... bet if it was your mama you wouldn't think twice would you... then again you would probably help them.”17
“I said GET THIS WOMAN OUT OF HERE.”18
“You can't hide me away forever... I'm gonna get you sick bastards for this.”19
“Please come on miss, you are making this harder on yourself.”20
“FUCK YOU... Like you FUCKING CARE.”21
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That had to be the toughest question that I still think about to this day.23
Why they can let these criminal rapist and abusers free, knowing very well that they would strike again.24
I could not see why they attacked me, made me out to be the bad one, I was only thinking of others, and trying to protect myself.25
Now I am a loser, a criminal, one that's record will remain and has ruined my chances of ever having a normal life.26
In the end, they can keep me away, they can keep me silenced and punished. Tortured in fear and memories, and let me rest in thoughts of guilt and deception and horrific colors of blood.27
But at the end of the day... somethings gotta give... and when I get back out into society... revenge will be a dish best served in flames.
Author notes
First part..just letting the idea come ... she is a nice person harriet..she has this nice american tone to her voice and I can hear the pain in her voice.. I think her and I will get along fine..I am a very good mother when I want to be hehehe
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Hm, I'm not sure how much I really care for this story but the concept of it is pretty good. I'm curious as to what she would do in order to seek her revenge. It's amazing how fast society will look past what isn't already spelled out for them and put before their very eyes. I think what she did was wondeful. For, if it had been me, I'd have probably killed his ass too. Your dialog was pretty good, I must admit. Overall, not too bad hun.
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Fantastic!!! I cannot believe I NEVER read this ... WOW
I love this whole story
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I do share her feelings as no man should ever touch a lady. They should just walk away if a femalehits them and not fight back. I understand her plight with always getting beat and raped, for her to take him out to feel safe. As for revenge, I'm thinking maybe she should come out and take on a theme as a super hero where she tracks downmale abusers and take care of them to let more ladies live in peace. That would be the start of true justice. You just have to come up with a hero name for her.
Ted E
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Man I love your stories they are awalys good girl and I like the Kill Bill theam
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My, my, this is different. A very good different. It seems like this will turn out to be a kind of Kill Bill plotline. But, hey, I don't know what I'm talking about.
Fantastical amazing work! Supertastic!
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Oh, wow, Blair. This was amazing. I love the idea, and the way you wrote it. Words of complete wisdom, my friend! I see Harriet has another style for you, it's working out! I also love the descriptions of her emotions, it makes me really angry to reflect on it. Great write!
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Very well written story you have here. I feel it tells very much in such little space. I feel drawn in to want more of this story.
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Oh my god!!! Wow!! Double wow! lol. This was awesome. Ohhh a revenge story. I am so looking forward to reading more of this one. Oh, what am I saying, I look forward to all of yours
Still, I think this one sounds like a killer plotline and I can not wait to see what this girl does. I can feel her pain in those words as well. Poor thing. She really did get screwed over by that damn system. They all need to pay!
~Joann
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