Suns Burn Wolves Again

One day, a pack of wolves was seen hunting in the woods. They had a basketball with them, to play with that was from all of their games. It was signed with all the names of the wolves on it. They were walking around, trying to find some game for their food so they could have a meal.1

As they came out of the woods, the sun was directly overhead and glaring down on them. It suddenly became really hot, and those dogs were becoming really hot, tired and they were panting too. The wolves started talking to the sun, asking why the sun was beating on them and asked it to go away and the sun told them he had watched a game between the wolves and the suns and had seen the wolves beat the suns and he really didn't like that because the suns were his favorite team so he wanted to get revenge on the wolves for beating his favorite team.2

After hearing that from the sun, the wolves got together and talked about what they would do, they finally decided on what to do and told the sun, "if you stop giving us all this heat and beating down on us, we will lose our next game to the suns on purpose." The sun thought about this for a few minutes and he finally agreed to do that. So the sun started being alot nicer to the wolves, and the wolves lost their game to the suns as they had promised. Eventually, the sun and wolves liked each other and respected each other, in the woods, on the court.3

Author notes

a headline assignment i had to find a headline and write a story about it-literally. hope u like it and check out my other ones i posted today! and from friday too!

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  • Cassie 2007
    November 29, 2004
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    Hey Great Stories They were really interesting lol i cant wait for next friday !!! -cassie


  • November 29, 2004
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    WOW!! You have major talent I am speechless. Great write, I saw the title and feel in love at first sight and HAD to read this, and I am so glad I did. Great imagery, and meaning, and I liked the points you were got to get across. Great job , and keep writing, wouldn’t want the world to collapse without your brilliant mind! Best of wishes and great great job !!!!!!!!!!
    Don't worry, I overlooked the errors, though they're were a few I won't mention them because the story was so so great! I'm not good at editing anyways, hehe it could be perfect and I'm just stupid. Anyways, great story!!!!!!! I'll buy you're book when you're famous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!