"what are you doing Blair?" my mother asked as I slung my bag over my shoulder.1
"Leaving."2
She looked at me strangely as if it were some kind of joke, if only she knew how deadly serious I really was.3
"Now that's just silly, out your stuff down I am sure we can talk about this, if it is that man thingy, I am sure we can go get some help."4
I frowned at her.5
"It is not a problem that can be so easily fixed mother and for you information this has nothing to do with that."6
Like clock work she slammed my bedroom door shut, fuming. I knew it was all because she did not want me to leave.7
“Why are you doing this Blair?”8
“Doing what exactly, cause It’s not like I am doing anything illegal, anything wrong at all I just need to get away ok?”9
She laughed, not a happy laugh, a laugh like that of fear.10
“Why are you so bitter, you used to be so happy why this, why now , tell me what has happened and we can fix it.”11
Sighing I pushed her to the side, unlocking the door.12
“I guess this is just something you will never understand, I am not broken, I am not a toy and I do not need to be fixed do you hear me? I just want to be left alone to figure this shit put ok ?
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I like this one. Blair is trying to explain to her mom but her mother does not get that it is not something that can be easily fixed. Blair needs to figure out what she wants first and then they should talk.
You wrote this really well. You have the feelings of Blair but you also put the feelings of her family (mom) as how it may be if this was real life. Very, very good.
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Aww this was really sad ((Hugs tight)) I can so feel the pain and confusion here you really do put alot of emotion into what your doing in the writting I can feel your pain so vividly
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Awwww
I think this was a really good and sad chapter. It's filled with so much emotion and I can really feel it pouring out of you. On to read part 8 
~Joann
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I felt a lot of pain in this one I think this is a great write. I feel it maybe missing something that you may have in 8 so i'm off to read that one.
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Aww come on. You need to write more! xD
Sorry. I've never actually rushed anyone before ^^"
You're a fantastic writer, Blair. You can do it
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