Walking through life not knowing how some one will treat you the next day is so annoying and difficult. Judgement does happen sadly even unwilling and unknown. What most don't know is how there judgement effect other. 1
A young girl dressed in black walks her schools hallways mostly unnoticed, tries not to judge others by they things they do and say. The girl understands judgement and betrayal, what she doesn't know is how to make them all stop clouding her mind. In 8th grade she was tormented cause of her religion, it wasn't her fault her parents are pegan and she loved and respected them not wanting to tell them yet that it was now her choice to choose a religion and learn. The girl was small and confused about a lot of things like why she couldn't find guy attractive, or why she all she wanted to do was hide and get away from the school yard. The young girl does not wish or think the ones ever really did it because they wanted to they just were confused like she was. There was a day when she got very bored in school and wrote a list that almost damaged her whole learning process and is luckly no one really found out. 2
In High school it became a whole new ball field and others out to get her. Everything was but on her that year it was that year she wanted everything to stop so she found a way to release all the anger, the sadness and in the pain at least for a little while that is. Life changes for the girl she realizes this is not the way it was time to deal with the truth she was hiding it was time to make it all clear to everyone around her that she was not just a depressed little girl but a girl who understands and becomes herself and a new door to a new life.3
She still does not understand why people just because they don't understand have to judge others, but she see and wants it all to stop and them all to realize what they are doing. She wants to scream at them, don't they watch the news all those shooting in the schools its because someone or someones past judgement on those who just want to be left alone or fit in somewhere. See past the cloud of confusion and see what you do to those around you. You have a lot in common you just don't see it yet, open your eyes and see the truth. She came out to tell the world what she is, why can't you just accepted they are happy and love they way they are.4
Author notes
I am female, I am bisexual and really wants everyone to see past their on judgement of others. I have been judged before and i know how much it hurts to be judged.
A contest entry
- Ever Been Judged? by Taylor Renee.
425 points, ended April 17, 2008, 25 entries
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This was so sad to read. All of my entries were.
You've got a little tense confusion; "n 8th grade she was tormented cause of her religion, it wasn't her fault her parents are pegan and she loved and respected them not wanting to tell them yet that it was now her choice to choose a religion and learn. The girl was small and confused about alot of things like why she couln't find guy attractive, or why she all she wanted to do was hide and get away from the school yard. The young girl does not wish or think the ones ever really did it because they wanted to they just were confused like she was."
See what I mean? I don't care if you fix it, and it won't change whether or not you win, I just thought I'd put it out there
It really made me feel it, though. And it was really tough to read. I bet it was hard to write, too.
But you did a great job.
Thank you so mcuh for entering, and people that judge others like that, it's horrible. It makes me sick.
Good luck.
xoxox
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Tay
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Beautiful
this was a really touching writing.. and it's all true. those judgements are done daily.. by almost everyone. and it's so twisted. why can't people accept each other for the persons they really are? i mean. Why are the human race discriminating those things that they find odd or just...different. if everyone were thinking like this the world would be a much better place. this piece was so true..so honest. so naked if you can see what i mean. it's the real world. very well written. and alot of mighty feelings and good thoughts. i enjoyed reading this alot.
Great job!
keep up the good work
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Aww! I love this because it is so true. You shouldn't judge a person by their clothing, religion, make-up, or anything else of that matter. Good job, Ash. Oh yeah, I'm commentiing again.
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