Dreams do come true

All afternoon she sat on her blanket1

Reading her book and watching the clouds in the sky2

She brought herself a small little lunch and a bottle of wine3

Now she lays on her back daydreaming of her dream guy4

What would he be like she often wondered 5

Would he be tall dark and striking6

Or will he be a blonde with a deep tan and a muscular build7

When she met him would he even be to her liking8

Off in the distance she heard the soft sound of thunder 9

The skies were becoming dark and the winds started to blow10

The air took on a chill as she packed up her things11

She draped the blanket on her shoulders until she was ready to go 12

She hurriedly ran to her bike tied the basket onto the rack13

The storm that was coming in took up the sky as far as she could see14

She climbed onto her bike and started to ride15

Her auburn hair whipping in the wind as she started to flee16

Shadows of the clouds now pass over her17

The rain begins to fall18

She tries to ride faster19

Riding against the wind and rain makes her pace seem more like a crawl20

Now soaked to the bone she begins to shiver21

The darkness now surrounds her 22

The lightening is her only source of light now the rain beats down on her face, 23

She can no longer see everything now is just a blur24

She thinks she sees a light from a cabin just up the way25

Now pedaling as fast as she can, she rides up the wooded path26

Please, please, please God let them take me in27

Shivering uncontrollably she feared the storms wrath28

She knocks at the door and she heard someone stirring29

The door opens wide and a dark figure stands before her30

The light shines brightly behind him she cannot see his face31

He motions for her to come in, she enters his place32

He grabbed her a towel because she drips water on his floor33

She quickly dries off… her clothes are completely soaked through34

She looks down to notice a big cut on her knee35

He gathers a bandage he knows just what to do36

As he cleaned and wrapped up her knee37

She looked at his face his strong chiseled features  38

His complexion was olive and his eyes were green39

His hair black as coal and his body the best she had ever seen40

He drew her a warm bath and gave her a robe41

She got herself undressed and piled the clothes just outside the door42

He took her things and hung them to dry43

She could hear him rustling around hoping that he was not doing anything more44

She felt badly because he had done so much for her already45

Laying in the warmth of the bath her chills began to fade46

She closed her eyes and began to smile47

Thinking of her handsome rescuer coming to her aide48

There was a soft knock on the door49

He asked if she was all right50

She said that she was and she would be just another minute51

He told her that she was going to have to spend the night52

The storm is a big one and it is not safe to be outside53

The phone lines are down and soon we will not have any lights54

I have made you some tea and dug the candles out55

As funny as this is I would like to know your name if I might56

She laughs and tells him her name is Suzanne57

Suzanne is a nice name my name is Miguel58

It is my pleasure that tonight we should meet59

If you are hungry I can get you something to eat60

She hurries and puts on the robe61

It is tens times to big for her small little frame62

She laughs as she enters the room where he is63

Now look at you he snickers now who is to blame64

What were you doing out in this awful storm such as this65

I was in the park relaxing and reading and drinking some wine66

I was enjoying myself so much67

That I lost track of the time68

Your husband, won’t he worry about where you are69

She shakes her head and says there is no one waiting at home for me70

That is shame for one that is beautiful as you71

So what is your story, why are you here, you are alone to I see72

I lost my wife five years ago to cancer73

I moved to the mountains to seclude myself from others74

I did not want to face her death 75

And to no one did I want to answer76

The lights began to flicker then the power was completely off77

He quickly lit the candles the room now filled with a soft glow78

He stood there before her and looked out the big window79

Wow it looks as if this might turn to snow80

He decided that maybe he should start a fire81

He gathered his paper and then collected the wood 82

When he lit them the fire seemed to roar83

He quickly stepped back and then there he stood84

The firelight showed off his masculine frame85

His dark hair cover part of his face86

His smile was warm and inviting87

To think he was alone out here was a shame88

He came closer to her and sat by her side89

He did not say a word he just studied every inch of her face90

He looked at her so intensely that her heart began to pound91

With his finger the features of her face he began to trace92

She could see the desire build as his breath became heavy93

The flames from the fire danced within his eyes94

The more that he softly caressed her face95

The more she seemed to be mesmerized 96

She felt her breath deepen and her mind began to race97

He slid his hands at the back of her neck98

He pulled her slightly to him 99

His breath now upon her face100

Softly their lips met then over taken with an animal passion101

He pulled her even closer and held her tight to him102

She felt his hard body as he pressed it to hers103

The animal instincts have started to stir104

He laid her gently back onto the couch105

He untied the robe and opened it slightly106

Pulling off his shirt his muscles then glistened107

He then whispered ever so lightly108

I have not been with a woman since that of my wife109

I want you Suzanne I need you tonight110

Tears began to stream down her beautiful face111

Come and make love to me until the morning’s light112

He lies down next to her and removes the robe113

Exposing her supple breasts, his tongue finds his way to her nipple114

Teasing and sucking with the gentlest care115

He grips the back of her still wet hair116

He presses his body against her again117

She feels his hardness throbbing, aching to be with her118

She reaches down and unzips his pants119

Stopping her and once again asking her if she is sure120

Now that he is released she strokes it with her touch121

Moans fill the room as the passion continues to grow122

Moving above her he spreads her thighs apart123

He enters her slowly until the juices begin to flow124

Their passion explodes and fills the air125

Sweat now drips from both of their bodies126

She grips his back and continues to hold on127

Into one another’s eyes they now stare128

No words are uttered they just lie there129

Breath now heavy and trying to regain control130

A small little giggle escapes her what has she just done131

He keeps her close to him until the mornings sun132

He softly kisses her and holds her tight133

Stay with me Suzanne please don’t ever go134

I will cherish and love you forever135

Last night you see was love at first sight136

She looks deeply into his eyes, she cannot help but to smile137

So warm filled with emotion an emotion she thought she would only dream of138

She reaches up and gently kisses him 139

For me to this is a forever kind of love140

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  • simply-lovely
    September 23, 2005
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    i like this one!! its really good..every girls dream.. find a hot man alone.. ha ha just joking ..really good.
    Kris

  • Mickie27
    March 19, 2005
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    This is really good. You have a beautiful way of writing and are so honest in your writing.

  • artis
    February 4, 2005
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    a smooth series of events that stroke the reader to the eventual climax of the story and the emotions, and a lovely tale at that, Artis

  • Kukana
    December 28, 2004
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    thank you for all of the applause!!!!! And of course for following my work and telling others about me... will look into changing the back ground on the one... Sue


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    December 28, 2004
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    this was really fun to read. the color combo made it a bit hard on the eyes but other than that it was really enjoyable. hope to read more >;o)

  • fallendreams
    November 27, 2004
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    It is far nicer to read something written well, like this, than the crude attempts with vulgar words than many must think is erotica. Very nice work and I congratulate you on your abilities.

  • plathishone
    November 27, 2004
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    Thank you for letting us into your fantasy

  • Call Me Joe
    November 27, 2004
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    i have to agree with the two previous comments. very nice write my friend.

    ~joe~


  • myron silver member
    November 27, 2004
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    loving

    what a beautiful, gentle warm-hearted narrative poem. you could possibly afford to prune it away a little to make it more compact but it's pretty good the way it is. an enjoyable and uplifting read - made me wonder if it was fantasy or real - it really is very nice...
    all the best,
    myron.

  • BeautiflDeadGrl
    November 27, 2004
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    cute.

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