The Shadow Boy [Unfinished!]

Once there was a boy whos name was Neji. He had no family, and he lived in a foster home. He shared his room with another child named Zent. Their parents had died in car accidents years before. 1

Zent had the bed near the window of their room. He loved to watched the snow fly around outside through the window at nighttime. 2

Zent and Neji were ten years old. They had a lot in common; both always felt guilty about their parent's demise. They wished they could have done something about it. 3

One day a nice man and his wife decided to adopt Neji. He learned that they had four cats, two dogs and one fish. Their names were Zabuza and Henata. In their home he had a large bedroom and a baby sister. He even had a small candle and his own lamp and a fire place in is own room!4

He lived happily and comfortably after leaving the orphanage and joining his new family. 5

When Neji was eleven his new mother had a baby boy. She named him Sasuke. Sasuke was loved by the whole family.6

A year after Sasuke was born, Neji switched schools and started attending a new special school. It turned out that Zent, who had been adopted shortly after Neji, went to the same school! 7

Life became wonderful for Neji, and he grew up through school happily with lots of friends.8

Wehn he turned eighteen years old he moved out of his home and got a job in the town of Zarcomon. He loved working there - it had tall buildings, lots of stores, shops, nice neighborhoods and malls. His job was to teach in the school in an eleventh grade class. He had sixteen students. Some of his favorite students were Anna, Justin, Bloom, Alex, Harper, Darleen, Kerri, Taylor, Rob, Snow, Amber, Darian and Serena.9

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Not finished yet. I'm working on it.

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  • ice wolf Greeters member
    March 5, 2008

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    This is pretty good so far. I can't wait to read the next part. I hope you continue it. I'm not a big fan of Sasuke but... still. Keep penning.
    Ice Wolf


  • Wildstar
    February 25, 2008

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    Cool! once again!

    I love the names! I have never heard the name Neji or Zent! INTERESTING, and very well edited *nods to taylor* ...the title rocks!


    • Saber 42
      June 23, 2008
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      lol. [Taylor is typing right now >.<] Thank you so much! [Taylor says thanks, too. Though I have to re-edit it, and I TYPOED! ]

      The title's my favorite part. [Mine too ]


  • anxiously D
    February 20, 2008
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    Looks good. I especially like the title. :0)

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