Double Life

A young teddy bear was sitting at his desk one day. He was so about his life. His mom and dad wanted him to play football. But he wanted to a dancer. Not just any dancer, but the best dancer in the world. He dreamed of it every night. The world would give him standing ovations and for him. But his parents were so disappointed in his love for dancing. His father would everytime he even mentioned the word dance. 1

So the young teddy would go to school every day and pretend to be into sports. During his free period, he would bring out his journal and and rave about how unfair it was that he could not be a dancer. After he would finish writing, he would end up being . But he kept his hope up that if he just continued to keep up his double life until he graduated, he would be able to finally do his dream. 2

One day a came up to him and said, "Ey you! Come'ere." The teddy bear looked awkward look about him. "What do you want Mr.Cat?" The cat just *smile* and said, "I can make you a if you would be willing to come with me right now." Teddy bear thought about the offer and knew he better not. That this could possibly be a trap to get him to do something bad. So he told the cat no thank you and . Teddy felt that he might have made a mistake but he knew he just wasn't ready for the dancing world yet. He just needed to grow up a little and then he would be a dancer. 3

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  • Ted E Bare
    February 23, 2008

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    It was truly a very cute story. Poor little teddy bear leading that double life. I think he will be a star when he's ready(lol). I truly want to thank you for entering my "Must Like Teddy Bears, But..." contest!

    Ted E


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    February 21, 2008

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    Cute. The emoticons were a distraction, but I could see why you used them.
    Good luck in the contest.
    Brooke