One day, a priest took one of his younger pupils out for a round of golf, hoping to somehow talk some sense into him. You see, this young priest-to-be had a rebellious streak, and a bad cursing habit. 1
The young initiate took his stance, swung, and smashed the ball onto the green. As he later went to putt it in, he missed by a few feet.2
"F***, I missed!" the young man said.3
At the next hole, he again smashed it onto the green and missed the putt.4
"F***, I missed!" the young man was really getting mad. After this happened a third time, the priest finally spoke up.5
"You really shouldn't curse so," he looked to the heavens," God may not take it so lightly..." The priest could only f0llow his student as he went to the next hole. 6
"F***, I missed!" the priest's student screamed, throwing his club in a nearby sand trap. The two clergy could only stare in wonder as thunder rolled and dark clouds gathered in the sky. Lightning came streaking from the sky, killing the priest instantly. A deafening, deep voice then rumbled from the heavens...7
"F***, I MISSED!"8
The young initiate took his stance, swung, and smashed the ball onto the green. As he later went to putt it in, he missed by a few feet.2
"F***, I missed!" the young man said.3
At the next hole, he again smashed it onto the green and missed the putt.4
"F***, I missed!" the young man was really getting mad. After this happened a third time, the priest finally spoke up.5
"You really shouldn't curse so," he looked to the heavens," God may not take it so lightly..." The priest could only f0llow his student as he went to the next hole. 6
"F***, I missed!" the priest's student screamed, throwing his club in a nearby sand trap. The two clergy could only stare in wonder as thunder rolled and dark clouds gathered in the sky. Lightning came streaking from the sky, killing the priest instantly. A deafening, deep voice then rumbled from the heavens...7
"F***, I MISSED!"8
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Comments
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Lol! Naughty priest-to-be haha
Lol this was really funny I loved it! I felt like having a happy day today
thanks for entering my contest and good luck
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hahaha
nice one but a little short. Well, anyway i am not going you DQ for this. -
Lol. Haha! Loved it!
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rofl this was so amazing!
didnt see that coming!
great job no wonder you won the contest
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Hahahaha! i understand why you won the humor contet!!!!! Lol, greatv story and great job.
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Lol! Spread this humor any way you can! I'd even put a feature on it!
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Hahaha, Good job, I like it
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Oh gawd this was good! Definitely need to pass this on, thanks.
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LOVED It!!! This gave me a good ol' laugh.
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that was dang hilarious
oh man i almost cryed
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Ahhh... that was hillarious
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This was fun, never saw it coming. Almost needed a dry pants.
Loved it.

beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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nice :
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Lol! That made my day^^


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HAHA, laughing so hard it hurts like hell!
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Heh. I totally didn't see that ending coming. Nice job. :-)
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Laughed so hard I fell off my seat. I had never heard this one.
Good luck in the contest.
Brooke

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FANTASTIC
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ahahahhahahahaha!!!
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