Hey Dad

Hey dad I wish you knew… what hell you’ve put me threw. I wish you got what I tried to tell you… I wish you knew.1

I was trying to tell you but you don’t know shit do you?2

I told you… I told you everything… like how you abused my family and how you scared me… I hate you. I wish you could go to fuckin hell for all I care. I hope I can kill you… to see you suffer will please me greatly. The bloods pouring out of that corpse that you call a body… I hate you, you suck, go fuck yourself. you never really understand anything at all. You never really got my poetry. You didn't understand because most of it was about you. so i would like to say go fuckin die and never come home.3

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  • Diamond2007
    December 11, 2004
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    Wow.. such angry words... though I am sure, just from what you said in this story that he is deserving of each one of them. Dad's can be horrible people. But I have to agree with the other two. He doesn't deserve to have you kill him, nor is he worth you killing him. He deserve far worse then that and he will get his. I hope this write helped you get some of your anger out and if you ever need to talk feel free to IM me anytime I'd be glad to help in any way I can.

  • SilentWhispers9
    November 29, 2004
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    Powerful

    kitten is right babe. he doesnt deserve your time. His time will come sooner than you know it. He'll get his punishment, just wait a little bit longer. Great write, and if you want him out of your life than show him this and maybe he'll get it ok well i love you.

  • Kukana
    November 27, 2004
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    I do not know what you have been through, though from the sounds of it,it is extremely bad, I am sorry that you went through such horror in your life, "deathofsunrise" is right you should not be the one to kill him, then HE wins... again
    Find your inner strength focus on that, become strong in mind and in will and someday you will heal.

  • deathofsunrise
    November 26, 2004
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    i know alex. you've told me what he's done. i know he's horrible. i love you for not killing him yet. you shouldn't be the one to kill him. he doesn't deserve to stain your hands with his blood. no, he deserves more pain than that.