Little Brother For Sale----Chapter Nine

Chapter 9"Homework Disaster"1

Mounday i had to go back to school.2

My english teacher got mad at me because i left my3

homework at home.Then Mr.Busler4

got mad at me "cause i turned in5

my assingment late.HELLO??6

I WAS SICK!7

But nooooooo.8

so basicly i did NOT have a good day.9

i was minding my own buisness doing my homework10

when drake came up to me and asked if i had any paper he could11

sheard.I gave him a newspaper.12

It wasn't till after he had sheared the newspaper13

that i relized I HAD MY HOMEWORK THERE!14

I rushed over to the sheareder and fainted,almost,.15

NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!16

"DRAKE!!!!!!!!!"17

"What?"18

in between heavy breaths19

i maneged to speek20

"YOU SHEARED MY HOMEWORK!"21

"Thats not my fault."22

"Drake!!"23

my cheeks turned a blood red.24

"Mr.Busler is NEVER going to give me another paper!"25

drake smirked...26

oh no...27

"oh thats too bad cassy.."28

omg......29

here he goes.....30

"oh and whats this?"31

he picks up my extremly advanced(thats another word for confusing)32

math homework and "accidintaly"drops it in the shreeder.33

"AHHHH"34

"whoopss"he says"did i do that?my bad!"35

HE DID NOT JUST DO THAT!36

thats it...he asked for it....37

i jump forward at drake.38

"AHH CRAZY INSANE SISTER ON THE LOSE!"39

he runs outside and i tackle him down.40

"YOU LITTLE BRAT,DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU JUST DID?"41

"MOMMYYYYY"he screchs42

of course...mom comes running out and shoves me off.43

"CASSANDRA HEATHER HAYNES!"mom screams.44

oh god,not the middle name.oh yeah.i'm in BIG trouble.

I know i need to make changes but it is a rough draft!

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  • Missi
    February 21, 2008
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    it was good

    really intresting keep it up cant wait 4 the next 1


  • xxmomoxxx
    February 20, 2008
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    he deserved it- lol! how old were you guys?