Little Brother For Sale----Chapter Six

Chapter 6"The Midnight Ride"1

When mom gets home its pretty late.2

"hey mom!what took you so long?"3

"i'm sorry,case the girls had to go and get their uniforms"4

"need some help?"5

i take a look at mom.shes holding all the bags6

"yeah,that would help!"7

"ok"8

mom looks around."i see drake went to bed,she looks at the little ball curled up on the floor.9

"aww,he looks so inconet!"10

To you maybe.11

"wheres vanessa?"she says"she went to bed too"i replie12

"oh,ok" "did you have fun?" i say changing the subject,i really didnt want to talk about vanessa.13

I helped mom put away the grocies and went out side to the horse pen.14

"hey thunderbolt!"i hop over the fence and pet him.last year we had found a 15

wild horse near our house.we put up signs and everything,but no one ever claimed him.16

i had called him thunderbolt because he ran so fast!We had another horse to.It was17

a girl and her name was starfire.her former owner got her when she was a baby,but he was very old18

so we got her.he never kept her in the fence so she was a wildly tame horse,if thers such a thing.19

i hop on thunderbolts back with no saddle and start to ride around the fence.20

i'm riding just fine when mom calls and says to come on in,when she shut the door, thunderbolt 21

startled himself and started to run wildly.22

"THUNDERBOLT!"i scearm"WHOA BOY!"23

he bucks me off and i land on my side,"oww!"24

"MOM!"i scearm she comes running out25

"omg god are you ok cassy?"she says frignted26

"i can't move my arm!thunderbolt freaked out and threw me off"27

"ok hold on it'll be ok"she says geting up"we'll run to the hospiatl and see what they can do"28

"ok"

I know i need to make changes but it is a rough draft!

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