Little Brother For Sale----Chapter Four

Chapter 4 "the ride home"1

i am so glad to be outta there!2

my sister vanessa runs up to me.3

"hey girl!,i've been looking everywhere for you!"4

"guess where i've been."5

i say as i nudge my haed towards ms.tiptons door6

vanessa goes openmouthed and gasps7

"Oh my god,where you really?"8

"yeah"i said9

vanessa stops dead in her tracks and hugs me10

"i want you to know i feel so sorry for you."11

"thanx,you make it soooo much better"i say sarcasticlly.12

"what?! i'm just trying to help!"13

"com on moms here!"14

Vannessa and i run over to the car15

"hey girls!"our mom says"wheres your sisters?"16

i give vanessa the confused look.17

"they had cheerleading practice"she says18

"OH!"19

"i wish you would've told me i would've brought cupcakes!"20

vanessa and i look at each other with a scared look on our face21

"uh....."22

at that we both start talking at once telling her reasons why she couldnt23

do that,i think i heard vanessa say that all the kids were poisnes and they would ruin her food.24

"OK ok i get.not cool."25

a look of relif speard over our faces."ok all ready?"she says26

"yeah"we say27

the whole time we are driving home drake keeps poking monica and me28

"STOP IT DRAKE!"we both say29

"NO!HEHEHEHE!"30

ughh that evil little twit31

"ok were home!" mom says we all jump out the car and run ito the house.

I know i need to make changes but it is a rough draft!

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