Hinata: yes daddy give... me all you ...ahhh1
jin rams her in her ass with his big long dick. Then picks herv up and put her against the wall.2
Hinata:dad...dy yes ohh3
Ino: what the fuck is this*as she walked into the door*4
Hinata: why the fuck is she here..can you come bak later cant you see that the room is occupied5
Ino: you fucking tramp he wants nothing to do with you he is all mine. and why the fuck are you here.6
Jin: hold up.. we were just umm you know...7
Ino: I know what.8
Jin: me and her were studying math.you know the one were you divide the legs, add the bed, subtract the clothes, and then multiplye...hold up why are you talking to me like i go out with you or something.9
Ino: im so mad at you just because we broke up that dont gi the right to see other people I'm never talking to you again. 10
Jin: come on we knew each other for mad long and know our friendship.11
Ino: you can never make this up.12
Jin: yes I can*kissing ino on the lips while unstrapping her bra*13
Ino: okay i accept... get out Hinata14
before Ino can finish her sentence jin picked her up and took her in the pool. JIn took off all the clothes that he had on*which wasnt alot because of fucking hinata* revealing his muscuilar body and his fat long already horny dick. INo took off all her clothes showing her sexy figure and her wet puusy.15
Ino: yes daddy yes gevie me all that dick...um yes16
Jin: Hinata why are you still here17
Hinata: I wasnt finished with you18
Ino: why you stop daddy...ooo your turn is over...19
Jin: i have a idea Vampeneze clone jutsu20
............to be continued.........................21
Author notes
this is my first perverted stories of many so expect more
from reading this story what type of person do you think i am
Comments
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u mad retarted lol ima compete wit u. lmfao.petco hatin on our nasty ness if we luv naruto chicks let uz b. but dat poppin
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What kind of person am I, you ask? I do believe you are attempting to use shock therapy and I don’t understand why.
If you are interested in creating erotica, we supply a forum and also groups devoted to this genre. That is where other serious writers of this material will be glad to share their expertise and review your material for its marketability. I’m certain as a writer, you intend to produce a product that will eventual provide a profit.
In this section of a story that you posted I couldn’t make out the plot, distinguish the voices of individual characters, nor make out the meaning of much the dialogue.
Use of unusual spelling is allowed in dialogue but misspelling is not allowed the narrator.
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