Her Mother sat in the kitchen, the pendant hanging of her wrinkled. Ugly neck.1
She twisted it around her fingers, making sure her daughter knew who was boss.
She could not let anyone over rider her beauty with such a valuable piece of jewelery. 2
She Her would show them bitched down at the club what real beauty was, what real elegance was. She would show them all.3
Anguish surrounded Her daughter, as she shoved spoonful after spoonful after spoonful of dry oats, wishing with every bit that they could be replaced with deadly razor blades.4
“You might want to hurry up, your going to miss the bus eating like the retard that you are.”5
Smashing her hand on the table she picked up the bowl throwing it against the wall.6
“Have a nice day,” she said to her mother, as she looked down, shocked at the kitchen floor.7
He walked past her, grabbing her arm.8
“Get in the car and don't say a word to your Mother,” he said, brutality in his eyes.9
Not wanting to endorse another beating as her body was battered and bruised enough, she followed his command. Making her way outside and into the car.10
Was he dropping her of at school, being nice for once in his life? Could she hope? For deep inside there was evil in his eyes, there was something she knew that was coming but wanted to deny it with every thought she could to release her fear.11
A few minutes passed, as he opened the car door and hoped into the drivers seat.12
His hand slid, under her school skirt, and he grinned, pinching the part of her that she had tried so desperately to keep away from him.13
“Are you ready for a busy day then?” he chuckled coldly, the engine warming up as he started to pinch it harder causing her immense pain throughout her whole body.14
“Save me, help me,” she whispered in her head to her Angel, trying to block out the pain.15
“Answer me bitch,” he said smacking her in the back of my head, causing her ears to ring.16
She nodded, as he slid his hand deeper, pulling out of the drive way.17
“Good, cause you better be ready for one hell of a day.”
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She Her would show them bitched down at the club what real beauty ...? Her misplaced? Again, the Angel is a no-show. All that pain and where is he? I really do feel for her and her positon with these awful parents. Makes me sad and angry for her at the same time. Good work...
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The dad's an asshole
Once again, this is provoking angry feelings from me.I can feel exactly...well probably not exactly what she's feeling but more so emotionally. I can feel the emotions she's feeling. It's so sad how desperate she is for the angel to come and I can feel it. Great write! And off to the sixth part!
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Yeah... that dark angel needs to come soon
This is getting better, getting truly dark and demented.. very good story.
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Oh, wow. I really hate these parent characters, lol. They kind of tick me off. Great write, though, the story keeps getting better and better. I'm wondering where that Dark Angel is!?
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short but sweet entry. Exactly as i feared both parents are not really suitalbe for partenting I hope this takes a step into another directtion. Very good write.
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Oh my god! Yikes! I had to come read this one before I headed to bed. That man needs something cut off for sure. Jeez what a bastard. Between him and the mom they both both need taught one hell of a lesson. I hope her dark angel saves her and takes care of those two.
Once again your descriptions and everything in this are amazing. Keep going with that inspiration because it is giving you one hell of a killer story so far!
Joann
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