Another day rolled around.1
The rush of the week had left her deep in thoughts of her depression.2
Her Mother had long ago dismissed her love for her own daughter, and she was more than alright with that.3
He had not tried to abuse her again, still remaining in agony. He was convinced it had been her touch.4
It was Friday when she arrived home, another dark day gone by. 5
Her life floating by, her life passing her by in a whirlpool of unanswered questions and desperation.6
On the doorstep wrapped in silken, Black fabric a small box lay. No name, no address. Just a box covered in the most smoothest, finest material.7
She unwrapped the box, carefully placing the silk on the door step, and took a deep breath opening the box, slowly and cautiously.8
She could hear her mother screaming at her lover, screaming for him to leave her alone, to stop it to stop hurting her.9
She deserved it, she deserved to know what pain was, even though those feeling made her guilty. She needed to understand how she felt every day of her life. So alone and so afraid, wishing death would creep closer, but being to afraid to take actions into her own hand.10
Lifting the small cardboard lid, she closed her eyes, waiting for the bomb to explode and end it all.11
Instead wrapped in Crimson, mesh fabric a pendant lay, sparkling in the sunlight. Its stone, scarlet, Ruby with beauty, the kind of beauty masked inside fairy tales. The pendant was that of a heart that hung on a silver chain.12
She placed the box on the stairs taking the pendant from out of the box and held it up on the air.13
It will keep you safe My fair maiden, a voice whispered sweetly through the air, wrapping itself around her body.14
She breathed it in, she took the voice and let it pass throughout her whole body. Filling her up with a strong sense of awareness and hope.15
She pulled her hair back behind her shoulders, her mid length chocolate brown hair. It felt as if he was there, as if he was sliding his hands around her waist, holding her close, breathing his hot, warm breath onto her skin. She loved the sensation.16
She clipped the pendant together, letting it hang of her neck. She looked elegant, she looked so beautiful despite her hash snow white skin that lay haggard of her bones.17
It will bind us together my maiden, with this pendant you will always feel me near, I will always be close to you, if you need me call me and I will be there, the voice whispered, laying a kiss upon her lips.18
Bringing her hand to them, she ran her finger across them. Had that been real, the kiss?19
I will never be far, just call for me my love.
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I'm just not really identifying with the dark angel character. I wonder why she saw him before but now only hears him. I am enjoying her struggles within the family though. You bring that to wonderful imagery and it keeps it easy to read. Good job with this chapter too! moving to the next.
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aww! *tear* how brilliantly your are describing the emotions and feelings in this piece.
It just blows you away it is so sweet and this guardian Angel person is and yet so mysterious....
continuing on...
Nice work my great friend.
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Mysterious.
'even though those feelings made her feel guilty.', 'close to you. If you need me, call me', 'just call for me, my love."'
This dark angel seems quite mysterious. It kind of feels like the story is going in reverse. It will be interesting to see where it goes from here.
Andy -
Awww! Sweet!
This was absolutely adorable. I LOVED how you explained the feelings! It sent me into a what if scenario, though I'm sure nothing that beautiful could happen to me, it's good to think it and the piece of where my thoughts provoked was even better! Beautiful!
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Yep... the pendant I gave you
Yeah, I remember giving that to you, though I swear the muses must have been guiding me that day towards getting that pendant for you... it fits you to a tee.
DarkOne -
The emotions were so real and beautiful. I love it, you definitely let things flow and they go you're way.
I can't wait to see how you spin this out.
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The best chapter as of yet. The pendant description was very well done. The kiss from the lover was nothing but romatic. fantasitcly written
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Wow! Oh my god can this get any better?! This is my favorite chapter yet. I love the description of that pendant it sounds so beautiful. That kiss! That was so magical and sweet all at the same time. I don't know where it is coming from either, but girl I am loving it! Your creativeness is on overdrive with this one as it seems to get better and better with each chapter you add to it.
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