Daddy,1
Come back home.2
Daddy,3
Sometimes I wonder4
if you are just lying there5
in the grave.6
Daddy,7
We know Mommy hates you.8
She still do,9
But we know she loves you.10
Daddy,11
Mommy cried for you.12
She's sad because you are13
Not there when you are supposed to be.14
Daddy, 15
Come back home.16
Daddy,17
Come out of the grave, will you...?
Author notes
My whole family cried after Mom shed the first tears. It was interesting knowing that Mom hate Dad because Dad forgot to update his will to give her the money - the way it should be in marriage. And Mom was left with no money, but her own little money. Life was hard. But we are okay. We miss Dad. Maybe I am still not over his death because Daddy was my favorite than my mom. My sister favored Mom. So they get along well than me. It wasn't too lonely for my sister, except for me. I guess today was emotional for Mom.
Feeling melancholy somehow...
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This is a very sad tale. You did a good job conveying it to the reader. I lost my dad three years ago. It still feels like today. I pray the best for you all. Shancy.
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its very emotional, one of the best i have read today, keep up the good work
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wow...
very emotional. i can tell it's from true experience. i cannot personally relate but i defiantely get a clear image of pain and loss from it.
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As many people have said, it is a very painful piece and I think, unfortunately, people will be able to relate to it for many years to come. One of the greatest, but also most sickening powers of writing is how it lets you transform something into an experience for other people. You've done that for me
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Oh.......
This is very painful. I cant say that i understand, but this is a very sad piece. Made me cry. -
Interesting!
WOW! I could feel your pain. Both of my parents have died, and I miss them both dearly. Your writing was from your heart. Filled with feelings of loss and disappointment, and surrounded by tears. I feel for your mother and sister.
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nice
Excellent point of view from a sad happening. You portray the feelings of loss in a simplistic understood style. Good job. We all wish we had someone back that we loved. The way you changed the word hates to loves from your mother shows the confusion that takes place from a death in a family.
So sorry for your loss. So glad you can vent your feelings with writing about them.
Sincerely,
IGW
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Terrible feelings....
One never knows if a write is truth or fantasy, this one rings very true and is heart rending.
Thank you for sharing such intimate and painful thoughts...
Amicus...
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