He’s the one who I call Dr. Feelgood,
he’s the one who makes me feel alright.
He’s the one who gets into bed with me,
he’s the blood between my thighs
and the person who can put the thrill back into bed.1
Many times, he makes me cry for more,
sometimes it’s much more than that.
He’s a pure sex machine,
the only one I want to be with.
He’s going to be the death of me one day but
damn, he’s hot. 2
He’s the only one I dream about
except for Vince Neil & Nikki Sixx.
He’s the only one I make love to,
the only one that can fuck.
I may be too young to fall in love but
I love living in sin. 3
He’s the one who tempts me,
the one who tastes good on my red lips.
And I’m the one who claws my red fingertips into his back.
Oh god yes, he’s the only one.
Author notes
This is my new poem. It's basically about my boyfriend Eric who will be my fiancé in a few months. I needed something new to write about and this is obiviously something I've never written before.
What did you think of this?
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This was really good. It had a lot of emotion in it. I hope Eric likes it.
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Great poem.
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Hope things are great for you and Eric. You wrote this well. Just by reading each line of this, I can tell how much you must love this man. Good for you.
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Good luck to you and Eric. By reading this, I can tell that you really love him and I think that it's great that you two are going to get married one day. I'm guessing he's the one for you?
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thumbs ups!!
really intresting keep it up -
cute
this is cute love poem.beginning: 2, ending: 5, characters: 5.
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