Demon Angel Part 2

They boarded and Selene went to the very back. She could feel people starring at her. She felt like a freak.1

She sat down without looking at anyone. She never could make friends easily. Most people didn't like her because of her style of dress.2

" Hey can I sit with you?" It was Liam who asked the question.3

" Um yeah sure." Selene replied moving over to make room for him.4

He wasn't a small person. He stood about 6'2" and looked like he played football.5

" So what grade are you in?" He asked turning a little in the small seat to look at her.6

" I'm in 11th grade. What grade are you in?" Selene asked looking at him from the corner of her eye.7

" I'm a senior. My brothers a junior though. Maybe if you have some classes with him he'll let you hang with him and his friends. Whats your schedule anyways?" He looked at her with a curious expression.8

Selene took her schedule out of her purse and handed it over to him.9

1. Drama Room 162 Mrs. Barns10

2. Algebra 3 Room 214 Mr. Danders11

3. Chorus Room 110 Mr. McDaniel12

4. Anthropology Room 423 Miss Elle13

Second Lunch14

5. History/ gov. Room 200 Mr. Danport15

6. English 4 Room 416 Miss Deven16

7. Chemistry Room 105 Dr. Montgomery17

Second Semester18

8. Journalism Room 312 Mr. Sanders 19

9. Law Room 122 Mr. Larnds20

"Wow you take alot of classes. I have Algebr 3 and chemistry with you. Draco has Drama, Anthropology, History, Algebra 3, and English 4 with you." He stated handing back her schedule. "I also have lunch with you. So if you don't have anyone else to sit with you can join me and my buddies." Liam smiled.21

" Oh okay i guess." Just as Selene said this the bus stoped in front of the high school. Everyone got up and started heading off the bus and into the school building. 22

"Draco!!!" Liam shouted as his brother headed off the bus. He stood up and let her go in front of him. 23

Draco stopped once he got outside to wait for them to catch up.24

"What?" He asked when they got off and walked over.25

"You've got first hour with Selene. Why don't you let her hang with you and show her to class." Liam said as if it were an order instead of a suggestion.26

" Whatever! I'll see you in second hour." Draco said with anger in his voice. Then turning to Selene he said," Come on i'll introduce you to my gang. You'll fit in with us." Then he turned and headed into the building with Selene trailing after him.

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  • pixxy
    February 17, 2008
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    it's a pretty good story. please write mor


  • The Boy
    February 17, 2008
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    Short

    I know sometimes its hard to write alot at a time, but you should wait a little longer before you post something so short so you can make it much longer =D. Also you should try to concentrate more on one story instead of a whole bunch.