My name is Karen Boobs, I was born in March of 1962.
My family life was nice, but a little complicated. You see I was adopted and at the tender age of 19 I found my real mother. I met her just right before she died. I graduated from high school in May of 1980. I am trying to become a nurse, and it is hard. I am married to a wonderful guy, who is behind me all the way. I have five kids. the ages range from 30 years old to 24 years old.
is this a good Bio for a character.
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Um...there really isn't a lot of information in this...I mean, there is, but there also isn't. Like, how is she the 'Forgotten Child'? And why is her last name Boobs? Is there a reason for that? Dunno. How is this sad, also? I don't quite think the background fits.
But to answer your question, it's a wonderful bio. If that's what it's meant to be.....but I don't see how that connects to the contest.
Anywho.....not too bad really. Just don't know like, your characters personality. Do you plan to use her in a story anytime? I'd love to read it. -
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thanks for your comment on my story. but I made a mistake and entered the worng one. I meant to have entered ""The favorite child".
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Seems like this person in relucent to talk about theirself.
Diffently believeable.
Brooke
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It's believable because it is so short, as if you are having difficulty talking about your life. Yes, I think it is a good character Bio, especially if you gradually 'peel' the layers off bit by bit to show the real person underneath.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This bio is believeable. I like it, but it's too short.
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