Have you ever felt unsafe when your sitting in your room at night and you hear a small noise in your closet? First, you deny that you heard it. Then, you make yourself believe that it was the ceiling cracking. Suddenly, you sink more into your 'safe from anything creepy' blanket for protection. Wanting to reach for the remote to turn the TV up so you don't have to hear anything unpleasurable to the ear, you slide your hand out and snatch that remote like in was very wanted to you. In the morning, everything is fine.. so you think. What was the noise really? Don't let your imagination run wild. You might uncover the truth, whether you want it or not.
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- I want to have fun. Lots of flexable options. by Talisa Tourniquet.
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Did you continue with this? Because it's a really good start!! It sounds like the beginning of a scary story book I read once.... Anyways, good job and good luck!!
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Good start
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HEHEHE, that was so funny and scary. I think the humor came from the truth and the experience, because i have dont that before. And im always scared that something will grab my hand when i reach for the remote. I loved this.
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Not nice....
Your story scared me...
Its almost 5am and now I really wont be able to sleep..
Hehe.
As if I wasnt scared enough of being alone and my Closet..
You have to bring up the truth too?
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Nice Job..
I think.. -
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my friends always said that I was good at scaring people
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Great. You just reminded me that there's a pedophile on on bail in our neighborhood. Now I will be up all night instead of just for the next two hours.
Asside from the fact that I am seriously creeped, I thought it rang errily true. I really liked the ending line! -
Short, concise, yet it speaks the truth. I know when I'm home alone the little noises I usually ignore suddenly become a little louder and a lot more menacing.
I really like the quote 'Don't let your imagination run wild. You might uncover the truth.'
Nice work. -
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Thanks
I wrote cause I really don't like silence and Closet. Those are the two things I really hate :]
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